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Chapter 535

Ashley stood alone in the void of space, holding a coin in between her fingers. On one face of the coin was a seven pointed star, while the other face showed the image of a closed book. The coin itself was silver in color, and reminded Ashley of a quarter, causing her to smile.

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Han Pol

Seems like a good system and a good idea to set some form of shop system up, should help the world to advance, I guess it's also really handy for the card magic. Wonder if some similar system for travel could be created. affter all limiting the ability to travel between dimensions to just the fairy gate might be less then ideal. Will Leowynn also get a world of her own to govern? After all he has plenty of points by now to buy more expensive worlds or systems by himself. even when i guess that he will still need to save a lot to update all the magic systems to the next tier.

Anonymous

I just had a thought about the Martial Spirits and the contract they make with Monks. The reason that they basically sell their soul is because the Martial Spirits still need spiritual energy even if they gain the other components but what if that didn't have to be. If the Monks were to also train as Spirit Tamers they could just collect the souls of monsters they defeat for their Martial Spirit partner to use instead of their own soul. That way they can still have the benefits without removing themselves from the afterlife system of Dale's world.

Anonymous

Feel like this chapter ended abruptly, like there should of been more