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CC Chapter 4! (Patreon)

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2017-11-30 15:03:47
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2026-06
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Bsoxmk2

I think you are missing the word strength in the second sentence of this paragraph describing the states. ---Strength, agility, dexterity, constitution, intelligence, wisdom, charisma, perception, luck, and karmic luck. The tooltips informed him that was the stat that determined how much he could carry and how hard he could hit with weapons or his fists. ---

DakotaKrout

Hi all! Please remember that this is the first draft and unedited. I will be making changes as we go, and your suggestions will help shape the world. Feel free to give feedback!

IhasaBangBang

*Sigh* Well, you got me again. I was holding off on reading these until at least 6 chapters were out but I couldn't wait any longer. Seems I picked a good time to start though. I look forward to the updates and wait with bated breath for the final release.

IhasaBangBang

Thank you for the great stories, and keep on huntin'

Jacob Santos

I am liking this. I am guessing we will meet this story's Cal eventually. This character seems ready primed for town building or exploring or pretending to be a NPC. It is hitting all of the good points for me, so I am excited for more.

Christopher Pride

I’m finding the concept for the stats system followable but not cleanly mapping to the numbers.

Christopher Pride

Also some strong similarities to Awaken Online which are fresh in my head from binging the audiobooks recently. Which is not a bad thing as I quite enjoyed Awaken Online. Though right now some of the stuff like the skill system is nearly identical which makes it feel a little too similar.

Christopher Pride

Also I have thoughts on phrasing in a couple of places but not sure if you want that kind of feedback/commentary.

Leaf

Very juicy chapter. I had a thought about joe from earlier. It took me a second to realize that joe wasn’t being sarcastic and actually had won the lottery after getting disabled and divorced. Possibly too convenient for the story? Still enjoying the concepts so far :)