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Kyle J Smith

Jaxon is already a great addition to the world! I cant wait to read more about him and this team of misfits Joe is pulling together.

Amber Dehn

The Monk!! Love it! Just as a note there are vets that adjust animals. Ours has worked on my friends horse and our doggie.

Joel Williams

MOOOOOAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR..... Ahem... sorry, that slipped out. Good chapter

grant pflum

I like the way you used practical skills to explain the monks pressure point attacks. One thing I always disliked about monks and martial arts fighters in other media was the way they could magically tear people apart with the barest of touches WITHOUT using magic. Fist of the north star was especially bad at this. I can also see why Jaxon was listed as too creepy in his application. I kinda want to lock him in a room with Hanz and Craig just to see what happens.

Kai Kuchenbecker

Hah! I like him. Reminds me of a friend who's a bear of a man and works as a physiotherapist. It hurts like hell when he treats you, but afterwards you feel 10 years younger. There is one sentence I have trouble parsing: "Only one of the events in the last few weeks where I was alone!"

DakotaKrout

Thanks! Changed it to: Joe shook his head, “Back on topic! Throughout all of the craziness you are describing, there was only one time where I was alone! The other people in my party should be just as famous, minus the Mage’s College…