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Bob of Doom

Beware the Bunnicorn. Though honestly I was hoping it would turn into his pet.

DakotaKrout

It'll show up again, I'm sure :) This is also an introduction to swarm leaders... (Foreshadowing)

Amber Dehn

Love it, as usual. This sentence reads akwardly to me. ". It seemed that the Bunnicorn was even rarer - and therefore expensive - than he had expected." I think you could stick a 'more' in front of expensive and it would help? I was hoping for a tamer skill lol!

IhasaBangBang

Ah, the good ol' number 9. My 3rd favorite number as it's the 3rd number divisible by 3. Finally read all the chapters. Having a really fun time doing so. May have stayed up longer than I planned, but worth it. It's fun watching Joe grow and get a better grip on things. As an avid MMO player it really strikes a chord with me as he's trying to learn things and chooses to do them the hard way, only to find out it's easier and better to do the same thing a different way *Sigh* many hours wasted on my own stubbornness in the past. Thanks for the great reads, look forward to 10!

Ludovic Migneault

Hahaha, can relate : Joe was really having fun right now, he remembered when he had been considered an awkward introvert. He had increased his social ability by quite a bit, and now he was just called ‘strange’. "

grant pflum

Is it just me, or is a Bunicorn just an impaler?

grant pflum

Is it just me, or is a Bunicorn just an impaler?

Kai Kuchenbecker

Awesome! Love it so far. Here's some potential typos I've found: "By the time they reached him, nearly all of the [affected] rabbits fell to the ground" "Nine [a.m.] game-time?"