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Mitchell Hall

... (• )(• ) ... ( •)( •) ... whispers quietly “more” But really, this is amazing. I bet the villagers will be turned back after the dungeon is cleared.

Dimokin

“I’m staying!” Poppy squeaked, had on the hilt of his rapier,... "Hand on the hilt"?

Mitchell Hall

T-Shirt idea! Dakota Krout, author of Divine Dungeon and The Completionist Chronicles. The small writing below it. “More”

Bob of Doom

Of course Jaxon has a Charisma of 4. And of course he has intimidation. It's probably a beginner rank with everything that he's been doing

Bob of Doom

"difficult-to-damage metal ... Have ever seen." It feels like you're missing a noun there

Amber Dehn

Things are going great! Hope they finish the super secret quest and save the villagers lol!

grant pflum

I can't help but feel that Joe is being a bit to loose with his class secrets. Between buying ritual components all over, openly using a specific class item like a tag needle, and buying class specific gear that is outside his cleric disguise, it isn't going to be to hard for people to add 2 +2 and smell a rat.

Leaf

So we've got roughly another 20 chapters after this one. Do you have chapters in reserve, or are you giving us each new chapter as you write them? :) Thanks for the new chapter, really enjoying it so far!

Cameron C

You said “dualist” instead of duelist - unsure if this was a pun or intentional

Robert Quach

After Joe finishes this rush to specialize and leveling up gets that much more difficult will we see him put in time to build up his strength and constitution? Half an hour isn't too big of time to invest for an additional two stat points per in game day. Joe seems ever more aware of his weaknesses and it's somewhere he continues to fall behind with each and every game day.

E. Rose

I think you missed a word in Aten’s summary: “Ha! So what you are telling me is that we now have access to an instant dungeon, a mine with a huge amount of the densest and difficult-to-damage metal [“we” (or “that we”)]…

DakotaKrout

Thank you! I have already fixed it in the book, I just haven’t reuploaded the chapter :-)