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Connor Hinrichs

Ah, this is cruel! A cliffhanger and no chapter on Monday? I'm going to be so ready to see this ritual be completed come Wednesday!

jongre1512

We are going to let all of the people in your section (lnow>I Know or I now) that you don’t have them, and if they have been targeted by

grant pflum

I hope we get to see more about how Daisy has been handling her underlings. I can't help but wonder if she is a tyrannical jackass, or just didn't like Joe very much and hadn't put a single point in charisma.

Bob of Doom

So Joe will own the building and basically lease it to the Wanderers for their use... that's pretty fair. Good choice for the characters

Mitchell Hall

How many chapters are in this book?

Leaf

Probably picked up in editing already but “in your section lnow” should be “in your section know”

Leaf

Hey Dakota, can Dylan/tsnake get all these facial expressions and face paling and so on when he’s using the mental keyboard and headset? I thought that was what Guess was doing, though she doesn’t have a mic, which explains her drone voice. Also I thought his name was Tim? That’s how he’s referred to at the start of book 1.

Leaf

I don't know what else has been edited so sorry if I'm doubling up what you've already sorted! For the part about Aten and Joe sorting out the new contract, Joe says "We are going to have to get a lot in writing". It doesn't sound like they discussed much of exactly what was going to be a lot in writing? It goes straight to the scribe showing up, who then finishes it in a few minutes.

TJM215

Anyone else think Joe is gonna “scan” the castle, build his own, and inadvertently create his own kingdom

Montgomery Box

LOVED the initiation chant. Haven't laughed yet hard in a while