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Leaf

Could Dale not talk to that Core? I assumed he would have some kinda ability for that, assuming that the core was intelligent enough to talk back. Although I can understand not wanting to foster any feelings for a being that's just going to get eaten by Cal

DakotaKrout

This is a guy that routinely shatters Cores for a small boost to his attacks. He is like: Chow down, big C!

yBoogie

"The(y*) entered the floor that had a miniature ocean, noting that water was pouring in from all sides. The walkways were waterfalls now, and the water was rising rapidly."

Daniel Everest

If Cal possessed the core could he use it to quickly refine water essence and delegate some of his jobs to it?

Francisco

Just a note: poison is ingested, vemon is injected via bite or sting, so the jellyfish in this instance would be venomous, not poisonous (unless they were planning on eating the buggers!). As usual, my boyfriend and I are LOVING your work ((:

Andrew Goudie

dungeon[']s will, so right now they are in serious danger of failing.” Really enjoying being back with Dale and Cal, very excited to see some interactions between Cal and Acme!

Phoebe Light

Are there multiple moons on this planet? If not, you should make the "moons" in this sentence singular: [Like the moons circling the earth, the Warhammer turned with utter inevitability, landing against the shell with enough kinetic force to cause a localized earthquake.] If there are multiple moons, how many are there? Just curious.