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Daniel Everest

Are we EVER going to learn his name? He's a major recurring character but the most he's ever called is "cranky old moon elf instructor" What about Comei? It's a name and an acronym!

grant pflum

"that would car" Did you mean "that would care"?

Greg Szarko

I think Dale might be skipping an entire Cultivation Rank. They wont order dale to war until at least rank C, but if he finishes building his Aura completely by the time his Break through, He'll go from D9 straight to C9, then he'll be able to Ascend immediately.

Louis Lariviere

. A chunk of ice ailed past him, I do agree that the ice ails him but i think you meant sail and somewhere in the text you wrote hs instead of he. At the end of the first snake paragraph.

Justin Pieratt

Who knew the Elf was such a silly goose? By the way, does making snowmen make him one of Santa's elves? I'm pretty sure he's the one sent after the naughty kids. 😁

Justin Pieratt

“How do you find the ones with monsters in them?*"* Dale quickly asked, thinking that the dungeon seemed to be in a good mood tonight