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Steven Willden

I think this one may be the same chapter as last time. :-)

DakotaKrout

Hey man! I re-uploaded from 25, cause I missed one. Added a bonus chapter for the week as an apology!

Xan

You made my day! Thank you!! =D

Justin Pieratt

Typos: “Cartographer Bob has spotted her and two others flying toward us with all haste. There seems to be some form of… atmospheric disturbance behind them.” Bob finished the last sentence hesitantly. (Might want to use "her" name here.) Also you're missing a quotation mark when she lands and starts talking to Cal.

Montgomery Box

Interesting. Cal has now created a pyramid scheme of dungeons. That's kinda frightening.