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Malcolm Tent

His like goblin murder santa. Stuffing goblin corpses into his magic bag.

Fred Lloyd

Is it just me or is the story becoming darker/less humorous.

Justin Pieratt

Typo: Dale’s thoughts were whirling as he strained his cultivation technique to the maximum he possibly could. He was having an issue similar to when he had first been advanced to the D-ranks, where his Chi threads were slightly fractured. All he needed to do was gather enough Essence to fill the gaps, but the issue was that he could only repair *one* section at a time.

Justin Pieratt

Typos: Dale’s thoughts were whirling as he strained his cultivation technique to the maximum he possibly could. He was having an issue similar to when he had first been advanced to the D-ranks, where his Chi threads were slightly fractured. All he needed to do was gather enough Essence to fill the gaps, but the issue was that he could only repair *one* section at a time. *Once* he got going the usable portion would expand, rushing the *remains/remaining* toward healing.

Dennis Vanderkerken

Loving the descriptions of the environment and the movements of current/airflow.

Louis Lariviere

reminds me of wetboys from the night angel trilogy. favorite kinda character and by the way theres a typo in the first paragraph its "once he got going" and you wrote one.