Sithrah Edits are FINISHED!!! (New edited pages 58-59) (Patreon)

I have been working like crazy to apply all the new edits that Jeremy Barlow wrote to Sithrah. This book has taken another giant leap forward is goodness in my opinion. He basically rewrote almost everything and then it was my hard job to figure out where I should stick with my version and where to use his. About 90% of it is now Jeremy's scripting and I think you will really like the changes. Before posting the next pages I figured I should re-post the last 4 pages again so you can read the new narrative which leads into the next pages nicely. Here is the new 58 and 59.