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Hi guys!

I'm super excited to announce the opening pages of PHOBOS! (the reboot)

I wasn't able to get the new website running the way I wanted this month and so I just put all the pages on the home page so you can read the first block of pages this month. Next month I should have the website running better, so that you are the only ones who can see it, unless you share the link. But for now it is open to anyone who goes there to read. Let's just call it an nice advertisement for potential new patrons. :) 

But next month, YOU will be the only ones who have access to the new pages. 

So without waiting any longer, here is the link to read the opening of Phobos:

Website: www.Phobos.online 

Feel free to share this link with anyone you want. :)

P.S. Please let me know if you see any typos or problems. I need editing help whenever I can get it.

Thank you so much for helping me make this!

Jason

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Comments

Bev

I read and laughed when the ledge gave way 🤣 Nice work! Looking forward to more

L.J.

Excellent but short (I know you’re so pleased to hear that 😉).

Hughdidit

Oh the mood is perfect!

jada rowland

‘Trama’ is spelled ‘trauma’...otherwise..great! Funny! De-looneyful!

Wendy Caston

Oh yeah, that reminds me....'suprise' should be 'surprise':)....but, as I mentioned, LOVE IT! :D

Cam Kendell

Perma-stoked about this, Jason. These pages are nothing short of Gorgeous! On top of that the story is very compelling. I’m excited! I’d say why not keep those pages in a place where anyone can read them? Seems like that could only help get people’s attention. The first hit is always free (sorry, that’s a horrible reference). :)

Gonzalo Alvarez

Man thats good stuff. I just want to point out, I love how you added a blur effect on the leaves for the spread of the castle. I could almost hear the wind blowing and the storm raining down so kudos. Really atmospheric stuff.

Nick Welch

Have I mentioned lately that you're ridiculous? Because, you're ridiculous. I love that page where she's crouching beneath the bridge. It immediately made me think of Vonna beneath the bridge in Sithrah. Ahh...nostalgia. Also, you owe me a new computer monitor because I drooled on mine while reading this first installment.

Tanna Borrell

This is really fantastic. One comment: instinctive, not instinctual, and you probably want to follow it with a comma. The spelling errors I see have already been mentioned :).

Jason Brubaker

Thanks so much for the editing help. I've made the changes and I'll try to replace the files online on Monday. :)

Hoyt Silva

Just read that opening and man, it's great! Storytelling, composition, black, white, grey design, all of it is on point.

Arnaud Arross

Lol! Love it man! I can relate to Dracula!