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Yay! I finally got all the new pages adjusted and uploaded to the site today. So here is a link to the first 30 pages of chapter 2.

https://www.phobos.online/category/story/chapter2/?lastpost=112-sir-yes-sir&referer=/page/2/ 

I hope this section makes sense. None of this was in the old version except for Phobos coming out of the moat and the big censored sign on Frank. haha. But I love the new direction this story is going. I just wish I could make it faster. :)

Thanks again for your support here on Patreon. This month was especially hard and December is going to be tight financially as well, but you guys are making it possible for me to keep focused knowing that most of my bills are going to be paid. So thank you a million times.

Oh yeah, and I have a gift for you in December. I'll show you what it is next week and see how many of you want a copy. :)

Thanks again and see you soon!

Jason

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Russ N Brenda Wood

On the third page of Chapter 2, I think you misspelled "conspiracy" and used the wrong "too" in "If you listen to much..." Also, maybe the second "Sir" should be capitalized instead of the first? Love the comic, Jason! It really expands on the original in creative ways!

Austin Shurtliff

I love the joke about the man-bat names being copyrighted and the joke about Sir foreshadowing too much.

Laura Järvenpää

On "100 Still Breathing" Eninac says reguardless should be regardless :) Chapter 2 seems to be pretty interesting

Laura Järvenpää

And is the "mother world be so proud" on purpose or should it be "mother would be so proud"?

L Jamal Walton

"Reguardless" should be "Regardless" "Can you pull it free from the cap?" should be "Can you pull it free from the cape?"