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Hey lovelies, here is the final page of chapter 1 :) Enjoy. I'll be announcing the title of the second chapter soon :)

Page 15: https://www.patreon.com/posts/zoeys-first-day-6036701

First: https://www.patreon.com/posts/zoeys-first-day-2447991

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Cohasset Alicorn

What an interesting controller design. It's a great end to the chapter though seems a little abrupt in her change of mood.

Mericus

loaded answer there :)

Mericus

manga comics use the drop of water next to the face in surprise to show embarrassment instead of the exclamation point of English.

Mericus

old Will Eisner comics (The Spirit) used lines coming off the head like a sunburst to show embarrassment. Peanuts artist used the same thing his lines had a scrambled squiggle on top of the head to also denote the complex emotion of dissatisfaction along with embarrassment ;)

Brushfire

She's just happy to meet some friendly faces after grumpy brush and mr. dick face victor ;P

Brushfire

yah, I do like the little water droplet, I forgot about that, you may see it in the future. I love manga :)