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The Webcam Show Page 2 (Patreon)

Published:
2016-09-16 06:11:05
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2026-06
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Lights, camera! Action ;P

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Abraxas

So we finally learn about the meeting "at 8" Brush announced on page two (hard to believe that you published this almost 1,5years ago). Looking back at page 1 I come to think whether or not Brush is as free of jealousy as she tries to make people believe. After all... she reacted pretty hostile towards Zoey especially due to Victor insisting to hire her. And I am sure Brush has not missed Victor's glance at the much younger's arse. The end result? Brush taking her crop to town on a certain stallion's arse in a way that sure hurt Victor's pride (who, by the way, sure still smelled like Zoey's sex by eight o'clock). Anyway... we are three days in - so taking Victor's comment on page 9 seriously, gloomy Zoey must have worked by now. Her motivation is still a mystery to me. She signed up for this, yet the only moment we get the feeling that she really wants to be part of the Stable is on page 2 when she glares at Victor. Looking forward to learn more about it. (I guess I am just way way too deep into looking at the whole picture instead of enjoying each single page :) I enjoy the timing on this page, by the way; a lot of happening, but still you take your time to develop each thing)

Brushfire

You aren't going too deep into it, I am grinning ear to ear reading your comment. you are picking up on the story I am telling and I love it. Don't worry, your questions will be answered in time ;)

Cohasset Alicorn

I do admit that I'd forgotten about the first few pages and should go back and reread them. As for Zoey, we've also only seen one page of her in these 'three days later' and we don't know much of her backstory so we don't know yet whether she's still wondering what she's gotten herself into or if she's dealing or dealt with something in her past that may or not have triggered a memory during or after the time with Victor. We will just have to see what Brushfire has planned as the story progresses.

Abraxas

Exactly what I am saying: we know little to nothing about what drives her. Still, she is an adult taking adult decisions. And she insists on being aware of the consequences of these decisions. Yet we get to see her intimidated, shy, even remorse. She is presented in an almost victimized fashion. Actually this is something that makes it hard for me to stick with the story.

Abraxas

*giggles* oooh, I found a continuity error: The outside light setting in panel 2 looks noon-ish, yet it should be more of an evening setting, being past 8pm... ^^

Brushfire

Haha, I imagined this was summer time, and at least up here in canada its still super bright at 8pm in the summer :)

Brushfire

Don't worry guys, this chapter will iron things out a little better :)