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Breaking Point - Score

  • Perfect 39
  • Really good 58
  • Good 15
  • Neutral 4
  • I didn't like it 2
  • Didn't read it. Only looked at the pictures 2
  • 2025-07-29
  • 120 votes
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Content

Was the first time I tried to narrate a story like this. Was Spirale's idea, as she wanted to help me with the Patreon by bringing pictures instead of comic pages, and see how it'll go. Truly was an experimentation.Don't hesitate to comment about what you liked and didn't like, as long as you remain civil, obviously.~Thanks!

Comments

Maus lover

The pictures are very good and sexy and the narrated story is also good, but there was too much text in my opinion. Less would have been better. Still a solid 8/10

FastTquick

I have to agree with Maus. The artwork’s the best part. Especially the alts, but there’s just too much text for each of them to read. The dialogue also seems to get lost in them when trying to read it too.

Lummh & Co

The funny thing is that I was actually tasked to go "less is more", but I just couldn't help myself. Wanted to push, experiment, and see how it'd go.

Insane-Randomness

I loved it, but then I'm a massive simp for Cynder. Breaking point was what got me to follow you in the first place.

Lummh & Co

Well, we haven't finished with Cynder!

Leo G.

It was a masterpiece! I would love to have more of that kind of thing.

The Gill-Stud

I loved it, nice art and a cute story with an unexpected pun to the end. Are there plans of any continuation or similar stuff with other Spyro characters?