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Jealousy - Score (Patreon)

Published:
2026-07-05 14:00:07
Imported:
2026-07
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Poll

Jealousy - Score

  • Perfect 44
  • Really good 109
  • Good 35
  • Neutral 12
  • I didn't like it 6
  • 2026-07-05
  • 206 votes
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Content

Don't hesitate to comment about what you liked and didn't like, as long as you remain civil, obviously.~Thanks!

Comments

kerryak

Pretty good comic despite my dislike of the source material. Hot scenes and premise. Hope to see more FFM comics in the future.

FastTquick

This comic was a really fun ride while it lasted. Whether or not it becomes canon in the show, I really love the casual polyamorous pairing of Tex, Bee, and Loona and how hot and heavy it gets with all three of them together. A great resolution that fits even the hedonistic character of Beelzebub. Speaking of Beelzebub, I really hoped she'd have an equal role in their romp instead of just being the support for Loona with Tex, but I guess that's what the beginning of Round 2 was for on the last page? The quality of the artwork and style was also great overall. I'd love to see more from this artist in any future projects if Loona and Bee ever get revisited. That's my review. Keep doing what you're doing, Lummh!

Lummh & Co

Thank you for your review o/ I'm afraid to say that while AngusDra (pages 17 to 25) plans to return for another comic (as it's our third comic together), it'd be in a completely different art style. Indeed, he was trying - with success - to copy FoxiMoron's art style, whom has disappeared completely last year. So, if what I suspect is true, it's very likely the last time this particular art style will ever be used.

SeñorBarbar

I enjoyed it alot. The story was amazing, the sex was amazing and overall a good story. Your story and the storyboard were amazing, you have an amazing talent and I hope to what more you do with you talented group. 10/10 from me.

Trixie Lulamoon

I would rate this as a perfect! Not because it is perfect, but because this is what I would like to see in future comics. I like the weaving story, and the constant power struggle going between them. My only complaint is that I feel Bee is pretty out of character. Loona is great, Tex is alright, Bee however feels very different from how she's depicted in canon. At the same time, this story would be impossible to tell without changing her to be a bit more mean. So I'm completely fine with that, which is why I would still rate it as perfect. The shots of their faces straight on looked a little cheesy, but I loved the sart style otherwise on this one. The changing color tones of the pannels feels fitting for Bee and gives a vibrant life to this that I would love to see in print.

Lummh & Co

During the comic production, I was actually fully aware that Bee might seem a bit out of character. My interpretation was that, as the Sin of Gluttony, a litteral Demon Lord of freaking Hell, she had to have a meaner side to her, albeit one still somewhat restrained by her naturally friendly personality, thus why I tried to play with both sides. The idea was that she's extra friendly during her parties, but much more like her true self—the embodiment of one of the Seven Deadly Sins—in her more private circle (of Hell).

Alternate

FFM where everyone is participating instead of starfishing. Always happy to see that. I'm not really interested in the characters, but sexy characters doing sexy things is something I'll never complain about. I loved the color composition of the comic. How each phase of the story is dominated by a specific colour temperature. It looks nice and does amazing things to the pace of the story. A critique for this comic and all comics you're working on. The comic formatting is highly competent, but sucks for phone users. This is worse with the text version of the comic. All the detail and panels means I have to zoom in close to each page, then zig-zag around to get the full experience. That might be the intention, but it messes with the easy porn reading. I recommend less panels and more pages, or arranging the panels in the style of webtoons. I can't tell you how many of your readers use their phones for reading like I do, but I can also say the flow isn't great on PC either. Great comic overall

Lummh & Co

While I understand the criticism about the format, I can't really afford to make more pages with fewer panels based on my current workflow (which is essentially one page per month). Because of that, I have to fit as much as I reasonably can onto each page, both to make the wait worthwhile for subscribers and to keep the total page count down so the comic doesn't drag on forever or burn out the artist in the long run. As for the webtoon format, it's simply not one I particularly enjoy, either as a creator or as a reader (I really don't enjoy reading webtoons). I use it for some SFW projects, but it's not something I enjoy making. If I switched all my comics to that format, I know I'd eventually lose interest in making comics altogether. To be honest, I don't really approach my comics as "easy porn reading." I see them as something meant to be read at a slower pace. There are plenty of other artists who do the "junk food porn" style far better than I ever could, so I'd rather specialize in a slower, more story-driven approach, if that makes sense. That said, this kind of page layout isn't exactly uncommon among adult comic artists like Zummeng, Meesh, and many others, so I don't think it's an inherently flawed format. It's simply one that some readers will enjoy more than others. I completely understand that this approach won't be everyone's preference, especially for people reading on a phone. It's a trade-off, and for now it's one I'm willing to make because it fits both the kind of comics I want to create and the way I'm able to produce them.

Leo G.

Wouldn't change a thing!