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Hey guys!This comic was supposed to be delivered last month, and the delay has been huge. I know that, and I'm sorry about it.The thing is, I've had many thoughts about this comic while working on it, and I decided to scrap the ending I had already written and created and replace it with a better one.Lately I've been thinking a lot about how I can improve my stories on a narrative level. How to make them more dynamic and interesting, how to create better situations, what's missing, and what I can improve.I felt this issue was okay overall, but the ending always felt a bit flat to me. Then I had a really nice idea for this comic, and I decided to change the ending and make it better. I think it will make the whole thing more interesting. To do that, I'll add one more batch to this chapter, making the second chapter even more interesting than originally planned.So yes, this is part of the reason for the delay. I'm not gonna justify myself, but I try to be honest. I just hope you enjoy this batch and enjoy the next one even more.The batch starts from panel 250.

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JackT

Honestly, it's a nice story, it would be a shame to not have the best ending you thought of just because of time. And lately, I see that you try to improve the storytelling, especially with growing within serie. I'm eager to see what you have cooking for us, chief ;)

Alex GTS Artist

Follow the link to the website or discord or use one of your links you already have (last month one is ok too).

Lucanset

When next release ?

Jeff gray

Adding to this the added story development is nice. Just my opinion but I’d stop announcing so many public deadlines. I can’t imagine that pressure feels good and when you don’t deliver on time it makes people feel worse than had they been left in the dark. Again just my opinion for whatever it’s worth.