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Ok, here we go with this two parts mini story. It shows what Rebecca didn't see and what's happening with her siblings.

I will edit a bit this later and I'll prepare a zip file for you to downlaod everything if you wish.

If you notice spells mistakes or sentences that need to be fixed please let me know.

Update: fixed text (thanks for suggestions guys), added title and watermarks. Zip file available for download

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Smiley

Second panel, have "assurance" written down when it should be "insurance".

Smiley

Assuming I'm interpreting that correctly. 😅

Andrew

On page two, did you mean insurance instead of assurance? on page four, you could change the line to "back to the lab." I can't wait to see the results of drinking the vial

Aeship89

Yessss! 1. Welcome back. 2. Love this twist

williamg

excellent story line

Topcat

Nice!

Kuba

nice, please continue this one

Celestial Studios (edited)

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2026-09-05 05:00 I wonder what Miranda did to keep him quiet...
2021-03-28 16:39

alexgtsartist

As you could see already, I fixed them. Thanks a lot!

Topcat

looking forward to part 2