Big ideas, small comics (Patreon)

Well, I finished this comic yesterday, but I'm really not sure about it!

It's a funny beast - I wanted to express my wonder at the universe, while exploring a tumble through the clouds of Jupiter. And god knows I enjoyed drawing it!

But on completion, I'm not actually convinced I pulled it off - and I'm not sure I want to put it up on my website. 

So, what do you reckon? A fun yarn, or a bit muddled?

Another option is that I just hold it back for the book version of of Bad Space, so I have a couple of unpublished comics to include in any eventual print collection (he says optimistically!).