Devlog #49 Novel Writing? (Patreon)

I've been trying to find new ways to make the events more fun and different. One idea is to occasionally create events with narration in a "novel" style or “old” visual novel style. To do this, I started reading a few novels for inspiration, and to be honest, it's something new that I've never tried before and I find it truly enjoyable! I love this form of writing even though I'm far from being good at it hahaha.What do you think? I'd like to try it from time to time.

With remarkable skill, Ritsu spread my legs, weakened and without strength, positioning her body between them to prevent me from closing them. She continued her act with unwavering determination.

—“Ritsu…! Let me rest…! Just for a moment…!”

—“Fufu… I won't. Come on, can you show me how you look when you feel even better?”

—“Ahhh…!” 

—“I-it's getting even hotter in here.”

Ritsu slowly and precisely traced from the delicate skin of my flat abdomen to the depth of my intimacy. Every time she did, I emitted sounds of desperation.

—“Actually… I'm at my limit…!”

—“Is that so~? Then, if I continue a bit more, I'll be able to see your most charming appearance— the one you can only show me, right?”

Ritsu said with a mischievous expression, while firmly yet gently holding my waist.

—“Hey, Maki… will you show me how you reach climax soon?”

Saying this, Ritsu uncovered the center of my intimacy, pressing the pad of his thumb against my secret core, making me scream:

—“Ahhhh~~!!!”