SeptemberSmoo #5 Redo! (Patreon)

I kept looking at Smoo #5 and cringing so I decided to take a stab at redoing it! It's really interesting because if you compare em you can see just how much improvement in drawing anatomy I've gotten from just a week of drawing endless smoos! 

I'm a little worried about this one for the twitter feed, since it's probably the most intensely suggestive smoo of the lot. Part of me wants to keep it a patron smoo, but I DO also like it and wanna share ;___;