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Hey,

Here's the biweekly progress. As stated before, I'll only combine stuff for the full PB one every 4 weeks. So this is just current progress. Just Lucy sniffing out who is going to be her snack, mostly trying to figure out which one is you.

There's going to be a small mini-game in this part (although I'm probably going to try something different here), that the player will need to pass, in order to see the rest of hte scene

I'm thinking of making these weekly, instead of biweekly, to focus my attention better. I work best when I have a deadline, and tend to have trouble getting much done, if I'm not near one, so it's worth trying out, so I don't end up piling quite as much work for the final days before a DL.

Tiny is not animated yet, etc. Same as in previous PBs. Although I'll probably need to animate her for the next one, or at least the one after that, I'd imagine. Dialogue will be written for the full PB5, since I'm still figuring it out, while working on these, so not included yet. Due to that it's likely there'll be some minor changes for these "mid-point" playblasts.

I'm also considering having Lucy's eyes open here, the original idea was to have her eyes closed, so she can't actually see, as is supposed to be the case. But this is the future, they have augmented eyes, as has been mentioned in the story a few times. Might as well have Jane do some black mirror style pixelation for her, instead of having her eyes closed! Open eyes are after all, much more interesting to look at, than ones that are constantly closed.

Until next week then, for PB 4.75.

That's all for now!

Comments

CaliTea

I do think her eyes being closed (currently) comes off as a bit strange. Hazy eyes, where they’re almost closed though not quite, but enough to give the impression she’s focusing on her other senses would be better. Or just open, as you’ve already suggested. What did you have in mind with Jane doing pixelation for her?

Eskoz

Well, rather than a thing to do to Lucy's eyes, it would be designating the MC and the other tiny as censored, or similar. So it would just be something mentioned in dialogue by Jane I guess. At most, some mild effect in Lucy's eyes, if I want something more than just dialogue. I don't feel like it would be believable for her to just be squinting, when she's supposed to be trying to guess which is which, just by smell/instinct.

CaliTea

Oooh, now I understand! Would a blindfold maybe not be the easiest route then? Already associated with kinky stuff as well. Unless that’s just way more work ofc