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Feedback time guys! Please let me know your thoughts in the comments! I have two questions to answer: #1: Regarding the second page, should i have it as it is now where the page is divvied up into each of the three before/after images, or should I have this page be entirely the executive example? then have the barber example on its own page, and so on?#2: What should the third example be? I think the best one would be something where sex is already understood to be related to the job so that it has a comedic effect. But I'm open to suggestion.

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Silentjii

I think the second page is fine as is. I don’t think it’s super important enough for each example to have its own page, just delivering it in quick back to back verses fits perfectly. As for the third example, seems a bit obvious but maybe have two guys in bed, focused on the top. “You’re about to cum, but right before climax…. SEX!” Cause obviously getting your orgasm once is great, but potentially being stuck having sex indefinitely would be a nightmare!

shakam

😆😆😆 excellent suggestion

Jake Rundle

My first thought is someone on a stripper pole. But also: what about something mundane like the dmv or the post office? Renewing your drivers license: sex

shakam

Haha that's excellent