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Hi!! Sorry for the long wait. Here’s a short Nicholas POV from Chapter 3 Nicholas POV: Chapter 3 (Dinner scene) While you’re reading this, I

Hi!! Sorry for the long wait. Here’s a short Nicholas POV from Chapter 3

Nicholas POV: Chapter 3 (Dinner scene)

While you’re reading this, I’ll be editing the interactive smut scene with Revna. Probably posting that one next :)

Also, feel free to suggest any POV scenes you’d like to see!

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Bessie Burnet

Welcome back! No need to worry about the wait, as I saw on Tumblr you had surgery (was it about your hands?) so recovery and your personal health is priority. Excited to see into Nicholas's head! That's one trouble boy. Best new addition to the rewrite! One of the reasons I'm having big dang trouble over ro choosing. Gonna be fascinating seeing his thought process!

GreenVector1985

I'm with Nicholas on this one Why married him to whoever become the next ruler of Rhivenia after Charles dies instead of just married him to one of his heirs? Is his father hoping that any future kids Nicholas have with with them will be pick by the sword ones they dies? There's no guaranteeing that will happened, especially since the next ruler can married another person too and have kids with them as well who can be pick too.

dara~

take your time to rest! i used to follow webtoon creators on here long ago and cramping hands were on the rampage against them too. i would love to see a bit more of daemir if given the chance. i think he’ll forever be my favorite ro.

Kimi Young Sing

Loved this POV. Here are some ideas for POVs: Nicholas’s POV showing the heirs around the city. Nicholas’s POV during horse race with MC and taking MC to his favorite place. Nicholas’s POV giving MC the flower with a significant meaning. Nicholas’s POV during the tournament (if he hears MC cheering for him) and the duel between Richard and MC. Daemir’s POV meeting the heirs. Daemir’s POV after MC becomes the ruler of Rhivenia and the MC asks him to sneak out to the city.

Lo

He’s so princess core. « Idc if I’m married off as long as they’re beautiful. Omg daddy let me marry this person I just met. » what a diva 💅

Danielle

Nicholas being so firmly against being used for marriage alliance but upon seeing the MC, immediately going “never mind I’ll marry that one” honesty makes him so based as a RO 😂 Other than the added complexities in the sibling dynamics, he might be my second favorite addition to this rewrite so far. Looking forward to seeing what potential chaos he brings if MC does decide to marry him after becoming the ruler

Lo

I think, if somehow Marinia needs Rhivenia’s aid in the future, they’re more likely to get it if the prince becomes king consort rather than if he is married to some prince/ss with less authority.

John Dearstyne

I was thinking Nicholas POV when him and MC did it lol but I also agree with your's

GreenVector1985

Agreed, I especially want to see how his relationship with MC will be depend on what kind of marriage there will be between them plus the fact that the MC can still marry another one as well just like our father marry both our mom and Richard's

Jackson Axel

Lena POV for the next chapter! Got to see/read their reaction to meeting the new king!

Thanh Chung Vu

Well due to the bloody history of Rhivenia, I believe he worried that Nicholas and his Kingdom can be dragged into a war for the crown.

Thanh Chung Vu

I would prefer Nicholas POV is after we left, since we don't have much control till dinner scene.

Momo-Michi Sachi

I know not an optional character, but Daemir and Revna's older brother's pov, or just their history a bit more sometime?

Momo-Michi Sachi

I would even ask the pov of daemor just after the Heirs left? Or his dynamic with Revna and who her love interest was in the previous story presented. All good suggestions though😍

Momo-Michi Sachi

Totally agree. Would try romancing all of them eventually. Too many good characters and differences. Health and healing first, though

Bessie Burnet

Yeah, for me, it's the not knowing how at least politically marrying Nicholas would affect the polys, since I'm looking towards Xavier and Clara mainly.