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Final paintings - the clouds and smoke in the sky nonwithstanding - I really want to know what you think, especially how it compares to The Pervert.

I'll put together an easy PDF of the preview version of the book for a download, with some extra development pages that I have so far.

This was my first. time. ever. writing a book length comic. I'm still deciding what types of changes to make as I finish the painting and gather it up, and I really appreciate your thoughts. thank you.

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cherrvak

so far i'm really impressed with how this is coming together. your paneling, linework and composition keeps getting stronger. i'm especially into your backgrounds; while i liked the pacing and structure created by the pervert's grid panel style, you've taken advantage of freer panel form to do some fun stuff with scale and depth, really strong setting work. hyped to see what crazy watercolor stuff you're gonna pull for the last page, and also what you're going to do with the white space in the dialogue panels: leave it white? lush watercolor texturez? haha sorry for gushing, i'm just excited. keep up the great work.

My Variant Cover

To be honest Im waiting till its all together to read it but your artwork on this has been amazing! If i had to compare it to The Pervert I would just say that everything looks tightened up with amazing linework but keeps the warm feel to the characters. idk if that helps or even makes sense but like cherrvak said I cannot wait to see the final art!

Marlo Mogensen

hey remy, if ur looking for feedback, wld it be straightforward emailing me a zip of the whole thing so i can bash thru it all in one go in my comic reader?

B. Mure

I'm so excited for this, I love the storytelling and mood a lot a lot a lot.

Wreavrer Mrarqruez

Just finished this. Thinkin about it all day, get back on actual feedback tomorrow.