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Kelly's backstory narration will use these. Why have all of that be just inner monologue text or spoken explanations when it's a visual novel?

12/06/2020 Kelly theme rock version.

12/08/2025 Young Kelly design:

11/08/2025 Early Band Practice. 02/17/2026 Band. 03/24/2026 Dale:

01/06/2026 Dale & Kelly:

11/18/2025 Concert Venue. 12/18/2025 Crowd. 03/24/2026 band:

12/01/2025 Penthouse. 01/28/2026 Party:

( City Marino's Pizza | AnimeCon Harem Eroge | Westerlin Hotel Night )

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Telamonster

> All of the drama from AnimeCon Harem could have been avoided if Brian had just hugged Chloe more often. Please tell me that was a joke that flew over my head like the ISS.

Zach

From Brian, he's feeling better and all, but it's been a long week, and he's still trying to figure out if anything could have been done. From the Author Note, I think it's one of those dark jokes that almost have a point. The girl was always desperate for affection, so lots of hugs might have been step 0 of becoming a person among people, but she was also so jaded I'm not sure she'd accept the affection.

Zach

Oooh, ok, so Christine still absolutely is not a well-adjusted person, she's going to need a new purpose now to replace the void of her boyfriend crafting project. It might also be about "being useful" or "making things right", but it feels more like she doesn't know how to person when stripped of social manipulation.

Alexander Crannell

Christine is definitely going to be a s&m girl Brian's going to need to study a little bit about shibari in all likelihood Ps I left a comment about this in the previous chapter making plans part1 but someone is plagiarizing you work on m.webnovel.com

Robert Nolan

Sounds like Christine might have a dependent personality disorder. I have a friend with it and described it as like having an extreme version of decision exhaustion. She also said that if she has to be in charge she make "mad decision" that she would use to lash out at those around her for making her do it.

Joe ?

Yo, is that thing about the eggshell true? Why isn't that common knowledge? Every time I make eggs there's at least one tiny piece I have to pin against the side of the bowl and slowly lift it by sliding it along the side.

Jeanie6754

Thanks for the update Boss. Have a good day

Scott MacLean

I feel like Rebecca is going to be the foundation that makes them a cohesive unit. I think that's what Stephanie is missing.

Jacob Bissey

I think she might be more comfortable if they got her leather cuffs so she can feel like she's restrained, maybe even get ones that have little rings or clips so cords or chains can be attached. It might help with her feeling like she doesn't know what to do with her freedom or shouldn't be trusted with freedom. I think trust is really the core issue for her, it isn't that she doesn't know how to person, so much as she thinks she can't trust her own judgement, and without someone to tell her what to do, she doesn't want to do anything and feels she shouldn't be trusted to choose for herself. Sometimes when there are too many options, it can be paralyzing, especially if you don't trust your own judgement, so having someone to restrict your options can be helpful for moving forward.

Zach

It probably doesn't have to be so literal, but that could work. Probably just a uniform, a bit of training, and a list of chores/responsibilities and a routine would do the trick. By "doesn't know how to person" I mean that her whole world is gone, from her favorite things to her lifelong dreams. She can't just fall back on habit because she doesn't have them, or those habits are unforgivably cruel. A couple years in a maid uniform actually might give her some stability to work from

benjamin shropshire

That last sentence might be the key. The things that would have to happen/be-true for more hugs to have been a thing would have also avoided the drama. (I think I got all the past/present/future tenses in that correctly congregated?)

benjamin shropshire

I'm thing more D/s (and some amount of Bondage) than S&M. The first focus more on consent to authority and responsibility where as the last focus on the compelling and on rendering consent irrelevant. I get the feeling that she wants to give away control rather than have it taken from her. That she *could* take control back and doesn't (or be *given* it back and isn't) may be the key point.

Alexander Crannell

Fair enough I just used the kink term I knew about not really interested in that stuff myself

Spycam

The maid bondage foreshadowing continues... Also, everyone needs an Emily in their life.

Dashinhi

Yep, it's true. As for why it isn't more widely known, my guess is that not enough people cooking got any significant instruction in cooking. My mom taught me that trick when I used to help her make breakfast or bake.