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We've gone through our first round of edits and they're looking a bit more like Steph and Kelly. First take is here.

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Malcolm Tent

Stephs face is perfect though. You should have him keep that.

Timtom12

I really like the image so far. Not sure what the inconsistencies are though.

John Ion

I know this isn't the finished art, but I do not see any of the playfulness in Stephanie or Kelly - as evident in the Mar 20 cover. maybe that is what you want and maybe not ... but they look ... posed? Hopefully that gets across what I mean. It is a better drawing than what I can accomplish, but seeing the cover would not make me want to "open the cover". It would make a good interior illustration.

Devon P

She's in a bunny girl costume, not a dress.

ukyo_rulz

This is what you get when you see two cosplayers walking around in the hallway and ask to take a quick photo of them.

TiAM325

I like version 2 more, still not quite right, but closer. I can't put my thumb on what is still not quite right.

JourneymanWizard

Steph looks great. Kelly looks good - maybe a little more sultry or mischievous smile? Exciting!

Karl Becker

Agree, Kelly’s facial expression is not right. It is too open and naive. She should look a little more jaded.

Batts

Aren't Steffs boots thigh-highs?