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05/05/2025 Kelly x Emily track.

04/29/2021 Top of escalator. 07/21/2021 Populated with convention attendees:

09/22/2020 Convention wall. 09/01/2021 Attendees walking:

07/31/2022 Upper level overlook. 02/18/2023 crowd:

03/28/2026 Upper Level Entrance Overlook. 05/16/2026 Lower crowd. 06/05/2026 Upper crowd:

05/15/2024 Cassie's mother & Cassie. 09/03/2024 Dan:

04/05/2022 Event rooms exterior. 04/14/2022 Populated with attendees:

03/07/2026 Upper Level. 05/26/2026 Crowd:

10/17/2023 Panel Room Door:

03/15/2026 Upper Level windows. 08/03/2026 Crowd:

10/07/2023 Atrium:

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Jake

Slight continuity goof, Kelly was passed out on the bed next to Brian and Steph at the end of the last piece.

FortySixtyFour

Whoa damn, more than slight. I think this really drives home how I need to go back through with a thorough edit for continuity. This is what I get for rearranging all of these sections so often, lol.

B S

I was just about to ask how she got out of the room too!! maybe move this end section t later (with some edits for rebecca)

FortySixtyFour

Or earlier, to line up with when things first started getting hot and heavy with Brian and Steph... but then Rebecca wouldn't be there for dreamscape geography! Maybe I should just clip off the Rebecca scene here as extraneous for now and keep moving on.

I. Ronical

So we've now established that Kelly has gone full Tyler Durden to go in and get fucked before silently returning to the rest of the group with no memory of what happened. Charm powers get weirder and weirder.

Jake

Love the Rebecca bit, I’d say keep it, just jiggle things around a bit. Her and Steph are my two favorites!

FortySixtyFour

"You see, there was another Kelly. An evil Kelly. And... I killed her."

Mkrayn

Yeah, the Rebecca scene is great. You've got to keep it and expand it. When she sees Stephanie and Brian later it'll be even more greater!

Five Magics (M5)

Maybe alter the conversation to exclude Kelly? I could see some of this happening with Emily and Steph's friend, who is also there. Maybe change up the conversation entirely, but keep the Rebecca portion mosty unchanged?

HardhatDoozer

Well you offered to fade to black with that first Kelly scene. But we wanted more. So like how they filmed extra Jokers scenes in Suicide Squad, here we are.

Joseph Breneman

Thank you for the chapter. Heh, I don't think Brian and Steph are going to be in trouble when Rebecca gets her hands on them, 'cuz then they can get their hands on her!!!

Peccant

It would be easy enough to edit Kelly out and give the discovery of indestruco-hair to Emily. Rebecca is good, keep her as she is.

V01D

There’s also the fact that they’ve already been having sex before steph put the Condom on - though this might be the first time we see it from her perspective.

V01D

You may be able to fix the continuity issue by having Kelly wake up and decide they’re too distracted, and she gives them a bit of alone time. On the other hand, Rebecca would’ve been feeling them for a while, even earlier on. - maybe this scene should go a bit later, with something in between. Kelly, even unconscious, might have been absorbing Steph’s Overflow, or her being nearby was a conduit for Rebecca to sense it. (Having a chapter between this one and the last one could show the transition of her starting to sense the two, as Kelly rejoins the rest, and also give them the opportunity to initiate the weirdness about their hair (the topic seems somewhat out of the blue...)

The GrandMage

Probably be easiest to just cut the conversation and have the other two girls talking about something but Rebecca can't focus enough to understand what they're talking about.

GoodOldChap

gasp don't cut the Rebecca scene, that would make me sad 😢

Youkai-sama

So THAT'S what future Kelly meant by "go easy on Rebecca"! 😅

Zeikfreid

It was go easy on Christine, and that she could trust Rebecca or something like that.

Youkai-sama

Wait wut!? Did I read that wrong and they actually gon have to fix Chloe face-ass!? Fak!

limeyspooky

huh? she isnt mentioned in this chap is she? I do enjoy a good redemption tho tbh...

Youkai-sama

She's not directly mentioned, no. But apparently I misremembered a line future Kelly sent back. I thought it was said "go easy on Rebecca", and well she's very cross with these guys, now. 😂 But I was told the line was "You can trust Rebecca, and go easy on Christine.", which is Chloé face-ass unused first name. I like a good redemption too, and I can see what her shape is supposed to be in the harem-scape. I just can't stand the baby-back bitch she is now.