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   One of the artists who answered a recruitment ad I posted to F95, Raichu has worked on both visual novel designs as well as portraits in a painted style—I asked him to attempt Kelly in his portrait style. His design used the previous Zaph Kelly designs as references and is one of the four artists in the replacement character artist poll.

( Brian design NSFW | AnimeCon Harem Eroge | Kelly design NSFW )

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Mkrayn

You did great here. Lotsa POV to keep straight and each character had their voice. Excellent, 'specially if we're getting an installment everyday. Really, REALLY excellent!

Mkrayn

BTW, please, please give Chloe what she really deserves: Knowledge of how fucked up she is and the means to fix it. Especially if it involves an entire shit load of humiliation. Much of her problems stem from her childhood and upbringing but at some point she's gotta own her part in it. Bring it on...

Mkrayn

Sorry to hear about the chipped tooth. That fuckin' sucks...

kenny taylor

👍I'll start with Merry Christmas and I'm delighted to see progress on this story, however, having had pleasure to read the first ten chapters together in their entirety, I'm left feeling that these bitesized updates perhaps cheapen the over all work, simply because I'll have to re-read the chapter once it's completed in order to fully appreciate it. Not in any way a criticism, but I'd rather wait 3 or 4months and then enjoy a progression of the story rather than the last couple of posts which ultimately amount to the main characters crossing the road and encountering a situ that had already been set up. Despite all that, I'll continue being a patron and gobble up anything you post immediately because I'm totally hooked and a greedy reader. Happy New Year, when it comes.

Don Lubsen

This is a good setup. I like the separate version of the same scene, so long as they don't get too long. Between Steph and Rebecca's wildly different perspectives of what's going on. It adds good depth with only some sacrifice of pacing.

Azure

Merry Christmas I can relate to it being a lonely Christmas this year I hope it doesn't cost to much to fix your tooth.

Zeikfreid

Well Merry Christmas, and sorry to hear it's been rough for you. I personally loved how the viewpoints kept shifting, it was well balanced and easy enough to follow. Seeing as this is something of a monumental confrontation between Chloe and the harem it only makes sense to show all the different views and personal reactions to what is going on.

Chriton

I like the POV changes, especially since there is so much going on under the surface with the mystical aspect

David Rogers

Well done, your battle with perspective changes is bearing fruit