Wanna ask you guys... (Patreon)

Hey guys! I wanna ask you guys something. its about my art style

not so long ago, i got a feedback from one of my friends about the line should be thicker and a more like a sketch which makes me really interested and wanna try it out.

and this is what it looks like (#2) comparing to my default lines style (#1) which one you guys think it looks better? any feedback is always really appreciated. or if you guys wanna give me some advice, please do! Ill be really appreciated <3 thank you guys so much again :D