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Page 15 - Early Post (Patreon)

Published:
2020-09-06 19:36:15
Imported:
2026-06
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There's a lot of little details missing from the artwork. Things like Vorpal's "MONSTER" scar aren't drawn in, yet. It'll all be there when this page goes live.

Also, I love you.

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jeffh4

Punctuation error in the first panel. Needs another period. Should be: IT"S OKAY. I BELIEVE IN YOU LITTLE ONE.

Alvarin_IL

Well, we know he overcame, so not quite tense. I foresee one of these scenarios in increasing likelihood - 1) direct overrule by Maglubiyet. 2) this being a cruel joke. 3) angel fumbling and pulling the other lever. 4) inspirational speech by Vorpal to change their mind.

Douglas Kelso

A couple more punctuation notes -- It should be: "I don't like the name given to me." No comma after "name". Also: "No one else in all of existence knows more about you than you do." No comma after "existence" UNLESS there is also a comma after "else".

Anonymous

I'm sure he will be fine. Unless this is a twilight zone thing and he was never there to begin with.... or... hmmm....this is hard....

Goblins

Thank you SO much for all the help with the punctuation! I stink at it. :)

zeta0134

... Ah. This explains why he had the mustache on when he returned to the group.

zeta0134

On the other hand, while I believe this is the correct approach based on where the story has taken us so far (and is a powerful moment for Fumbles as a character), I have to point out: Didn't Fumbles specifically make his alter-ego the player character? He explains it here: https://www.goblinscomic.com/comic/09022005 So, wouldn't Señor Vorpal Kickass'o actually be the name on his character sheet?