COMIC: Space Camp: Complete Revised Day 2 Chapter (Patreon)

Alright, alright! I'm done enough with this revised chapter of Space Camp to post it as one long read! But first...

• The original rough draft of Day 2 (16 pages)
• The expanded and inked pages: 1-5, 6-10, 11-15, 16-18, 19-22

And now...

The touched-up and re-ordered pages!

Current plan is to send these off to my agent for her feedback while Matt takes a pass at giving them a slightly-more-professional color treatment.

One step closer to getting it sent out as part of a pitch to publishers!

I'll work on making a post about pointing out the page re-shuffling that I did and why, as well as why I expanded the pages that I did.

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UPDATE: December 23, 2023:

I am now working on the third (and final?) draft of this chapter. It is scheduled to have 29 pages.