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Letters From Space Camp is my memoir about going through a mental hospital program and for my  pitch to publishers I am revising the Day Two chapter, which covers my  second day in the program. This is my third draft of this chapter, you can read the first draft and second draft to see how it's changed (and it has changed).

➤➤➤ Catch up on the entire chapter-in-progress so far here.

Click through the gallery-carosel-thing to see the different drafts this page went through!


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Hannah K

The sketchy Erika vs rendered everything else? Loving the execution on that! I know it was something you were hoping to "push" more on (iirc?). Paying off, looking good, 👏

Dirk Bergstrom

You've got the wrong year in the date stamp at the bottom of the image.