Mecha-chan? (Patreon)

This one is getting...not that weird actually. It doesn't feel super adventurous to me.Japanese chorus, a generally pop-punk vibe, some rock-rap verses.Still haven't decided if this is about the mech, itself, or the pilot in the mech, but I might leave that to the listener's interpretation. 🤔But it's getting somewhere and I don't entirely hate it, so that's always a good sign. 🙂No muses screaming in my ears so we're in "throw everything at the wall and see what sticks" mode.I'm having a really hard time with the last verse, though. Like I'm beating my head against the wall with it. Ultimately, it might just come out as a shorter song if I can't get something to work, which isn't bad. 2:30 seconds is my preferred low end, and anything above 3:30 is getting long.