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Is this good or nah? (Patreon)

Published:
2024-07-04 12:47:52
Edited:
2024-07-04 13:00:25
Imported:
2026-06
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It's almost 8am and I haven't really slept, but—sorry, sleepy-brain can't words good—but I think it's good? I'm really not sure. Tell me if this is good or not. If it is, I'll keep working on it, but if it's shit, you have to tell me if it's shit.

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La Vida Awesome (edited)

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2026-09-24 08:00 I like where it’s going. The opening is great! It tickles my brain stem just right. *insert Pacha meme*👌 The staccato at the end throws me off. I think if you want to keep that part in, shorten it just a second or two, maybe a half second of dead air, and then jump back in with a metal scream.
2024-07-04 13:49

Charli Morgan

I think I agree with the bit at the end, yeah. It does tickle the brain nicely, doesn't it 😇

Charli Morgan

Okay faaaantastic ^_^ I'll get to working on on it after I take a 20 hour nap (again)

Crowmy

The basis works. The beat is energizing, the melody is catchy. I think the rhythms of the lyrics is good. The „kill it now!“ start works well as hook. The fuck, phunk is funny and has a good mouthfeel and also an 4am brain is a bit fried but I feel energized and without worry, albeit the text is nonsensical. I don’t know enough about phunk as genre, but if I’m not mistaken, it prioritizes feel and aesthetics over content (which is similar to cloud rap). I think you can work with that. Usually your songs have a lot to tell, as in text that convey meaning seems important to you. Having this more „it was 4 am and I felt that shit and put it out raw“ but in your current style is interesting. I think going for that feel angle could be fun and useful? Of course you could also workshop the lyrics to a point it is more akin to the other releases, but I think you have an opportunity here to explore other parts. If you’d ask for advice, I’d say: go to sleep. And if you still can connect to the feel, continue and let the flow guide you.

Charli Morgan

Wait, did I just make phonk? Holy shit I did. 😶 Yeah, it's not really telling much of a story. I couldn't come up with good lyrics so I decided to pick sounds and then string them together. My vague idea is that Mecha-chan is having a meltdown or something like that? Okay, yeah, but nap time for sure. I shall be back in 20 hours 😴

Crowmy

I really did write phunk instead of Phonk 🙈 And yeah, I think there are similarities, but your hyperpop style is distinct different and maybe more akin to nightcore phonk, but not the same due to different rhythm and bass. I think the meltdown idea could be interesting. Similar angle, different feel: overload, overdrive. Looking forward to what you come up after a good rest hopefully!

Ryan Holt

Hard opening for damn sure

PrimalRyzen

at a basis, i fucking love it

Kaylin Valkyrie

it sounds really good. lyrics leave me a little lost but I was vibing hard anyways

Lionheartwon

I definitely like it so far and definitely can feel it’ll be a beat

Vel

So far sounds good cant wait to see where it goes

Cretin

....needs more "Fuck"

Cretin

Nah but fr it's a sick opening sounds good