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I want to make it work, but every time I touch it, I make it worse. If you think this is bad, it completely nose-dives the second after this cuts off.

And it makes me sad because this is—or this should be—one of the most beautiful songs I've ever written. It's definitely one of the best poems I've ever written. And it's close to my heart, oh so close. I'm gonna' cry again.

Why can't I fix it? Why won't it work the way I want it to? I know there's a solution to this, but I don't think I have to patience to get it work.

And the funny thing is that I wrote LGL in, like, a couple days. It was so easy. It just worked. Why won't this one just work too? WHY.

Anyway, yeah, if only I had a song about this.

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apmoore94

Maybe if you went back to an earlier version, it would help you? Far too many times I find myself scrapping it all and starting over on things. I firmly believe you can absolutely make something you're proud of with this, but sometimes we have to step back and get away from the problem for awhile too. Just clear it out of your mind, play some Helldivers or Mechwarrior or something for a bit. And you still get a 🍪, cause we all need a cookie when we're feeling down!

AnHonestHeart

Take some time off from this for now and revisit it later? It’s got a lot of potential and sounds very pretty, but it may not be its time yet. Some songs just don’t work until they want to work Side note, this song reminds me a lot of “Obstacles” by Syd Matters, and that gives me a lot of hope for it

Crowmy

Making things that are close to one‘s heart are especially difficult. Often the vision exceeds the perceived skills. But I’m confident you’ll get there. And if you can’t believe in yourself think of Gurren Lagann and believe in Kamina, who believes in you <3

Robert Hill

Any gamer worth their salt knows that sometimes you need to take a break from a tough boss to beat it. Don't lose hope and just let yourself do other things until inspiration hits and you think you can make it how you want it. 🍪 - Because you deserve it!

Charli Morgan

Maybe it can just be a poem. It's good at that. 🥲

La Vida Awesome

This is really really beautiful!!! 😍 And don’t panic. It’ll come to you in the shower or something after you think you’ve given up on it forever…

Dan Parriott

I think a lot of artists have that unicorn they chase after and fail to get time and time again. Keep at it, but don’t be consumed by it. Your brain will probably keep working on it in one of the thousands of things it’s working through at any moment.

La Vida Awesome

I’m not an artist, just a fan, so take these two cents as you will: I think it’s too “busy”. Let the music support the beautiful lyrics. I know you want that dreamy quality, but I really think you should Keep it simple, let the lyrics shine through, like Johnny Cash’s “Sunday Morning Coming Down”. Hope this helps. And keep on singing, sister! 🎤🎶