Sapphic Oscillation v2 [WIP] (Patreon)

So compared to the previous version, how do we feel about this one? I mostly just pitched my voice down, which caused some problems. Aside that, there are more slight differences aside that, like the key changes. I'm not sure if they make it fun or not, but the song feels...boring to me? Is it boring? Tell me. I can handle it. There is more to it, but it's kinda' just more of this.

Cuz idk, i kinda want to start over from scratch bc it's not as good as I wanted it to be. But then again, almost nothing ever is. I don't know. Tell me if it sucks. Please. I need to hear it from someone else. And it's just so...it sounds so messy.

Wait, I got it. The rhyme and rhythm is super repetitive, so the melody has to carry the whole song. Time to...redo THE WHOLE FUCKING THING. 😵

NO COOKIES FOR ME. I swear, I have no idea how to use most of my equipment and sometimes, especially in songs like this, it really fucking shows. THIS, people, IS WHY I DON'T LIKE TO DO ROCK SONGS ANYMORE. All of my technical ineptitude shows and it's just SO obvious. 😭