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Improvement over the last version? Yes? No? Maybe? Idk about this one. I just, ugh, idk about it.

I think I really fucked up the mastering on this, honestly. :/

Feels just, idk, just...idk what im listening to.

Um... you know what? i give up on this one. it's a fun song, but I just don't feel like the juice is worth the squeeze, here.

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Fickle

I actually really like this a lot.

freakofearth ~{ 🍪🖤🐈 }~

I will be honest with you, I think Draft 2 was better. I think you may have hit the distortion a little too hard on this one. Throw it in your back pocket, there is gold here but you're not feeling it rn and that is okay!! You know I have complete faith in your process.

Fickle

Charli, I love your music so much. The way this song makes me bawl like a small child.

Charli Morgan

You're probably right. I do like it and I will probs come back to it eventually

Fickle

I also agree with Freak, I think draft 2 is a bit better. I also think this song is worth it, but thats just me. It hits my heart on a personal level and I really like that.

Charli Morgan

You're gonna have to be happy with these last drafts, though, because if I come back to it, it'll be 6 months at minimum. I need to come back with new ears.

Fickle

Of course! These are still really good and I'm gonna enjoy all your music regardless.

A

I hadn’t listened to the previous drafts so I went back to 1 and 2. I think I like Draft 3 better with the reverb, except maybe it’s thrown off the pitch of the long tone in the last few seconds? Maybe that’s just in my head though. Anyway I like it. I’m not as wildly hyped for it like other songs that are more up my alley say, but I think it’s got some there there. Maybe the feeling for this one will strike you again later? I wasn’t expecting so many fish based on the title and opening but I think it tracks.

A

Side story - I must’ve paused before the spoken last 30s on one listen or something. Because it randomly auto-played just that bit at the end of my Patreon “playlist” while I was working out. Unsettling.