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EDIT: A slightly different master that fixes an issue I had with it at 03:52. And makes the whole thing a bit more dynamic, idk.

There, I ruined it <3

_[Intro]Evergreen in the air is a jacket, straightWanting to escape but I'mTrapped in a basket'Cause I need to make my wayMaybe I just need a little change.

[Verse]The neighbors deem her strange—her thoughts a hidden latch,She traces frost on windowpanes, then whispers to the thatch.A ribbon in her apron—she names the evening stars,Frayed hems upon her petticoat, she claims the night is harsh.

[Verse]I vow she speaks to willows, and treads the narrow path—Faint lavender in woven locks—no tale repeats the math.A neighbor calls her ā€œlonelyā€ā€”the milkman cannot see—But I have watched the window blink, and know she must be keen.

[Bridge]Her fence collects the blackbirds, her dress collects the sun,She smiles as if the morning’s glass had never come undone.

[Pre-chorus]She ties her shoes with daffodils, she signs her name in steam—No letters ever came for her—except, perhaps, in dream.

[Chorus]Evergreen in the air is a jacketStraight wanting to escape but I'mTrapped in a basket'Cause I need to make my wayMaybe I just need a little change.

[Verse]Some say her name’s a compass, a bell beneath the green—Crushed before the Sunday bell, and crushed by all between.Aberdeen, the women sing, will wander past the spring—But Aberdeen walks quietly; her heart does not take wing.

[Verse]And if she loves a robin, and if she fears the frost,She cups a brittle syllable, considers what is lost.We watch her from the hydrangeas, our distance always neat—But Aberdeen will always find the wildness in the wheat.

[Pre-outro]The lamp above her windowsill has never burned quite right,She pins her hope to feather ends, she braids her will to light.A dozen summer evenings drift by in crooked line—Aberdeen still counting—one for hers, and two for mine.

[Outro]Evergreen in the air is a jacketStraight wanting to escape but I'mTrapped in a basket'Cause I need to make my wayMaybe I just need a little change.

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Charli Morgan

I thought having a _little change_ would be suitable

Charli Morgan

I think the master is good except for one part near the end where it all gets way too loud. gonna have to change that but I'm pretty happy with it.

A

This one is so cool. The verses all feel different but flow cohesively together. It’s hard to pick a favourite part of it.

Charli Morgan

It's my first "I just quit drugs forever" song. Whole story there. Anyway, this song, to me, is the one that made me really switch the way I made songs and, idk, made me realize that I don't need anything to be creative; I'm weird all on my own <3

Ben Welch

I can see why you’ve been struggling over this one, there’s ALOT going on. Despite all the disparate elements in it I think you landed the ship. The whole piece has kind of a cyberpunk Lewis Carroll vibe to it, I like it.

Charli Morgan

Cyberpunk Lewis Carroll is my favorite new term. But yeah, no, IT'S ONE OF THE MOST COMPLEX PIECES and getting everything to be friends has been a challenge. I had this idea in my head of what it could be and I _knew_ it was really good, but actually executing it was so hard! 😭 It still feels like it's barreling held together with spit and toilet paper, but it _is_ holding and I'm very proud of myself for that. šŸ¤

Ben Welch

I mean, the chaos can actually be a virtue in a way. Especially if you liked the Lewis Carroll label. I’m not sure if you’d want to do it, but there’s a version of this song that ossilates between clear lyrics and glitches/static as reality fades.

Charli Morgan

I'm not touching it. I tried so many endings that you cannot possibly imagine and thst was one of them, but I just couldn't execute it. This works and I'm gonna stick with it!

Ben Welch

Ultimately all that matters is that you’re happy with it. You can move on now without the project haunting you.

Charli Morgan

I really didn't think I'd be able to do this song well but I did and I'm happy 😊

ProjectGnome

You should make We Are Charli merch

Charli Morgan

I would need to make it myself because I don't make money on merch, like, ever, and I'm a terrible graphic designer. I have a design with my logo on it, though, if you're interested in that. ~ ( = ^   ^ ) / ( : : )

ProjectGnome

How come you don’t charge enough to make a profit off of your merch? Most of the time when somebody buys merch they want to support the creator they love while also representing their favorite creators brand

Charli Morgan

Because I can't imagine someone paying $150 for a sweatshirt. If someone wants to pay $40 for a sweatshirt and CashApp me $110, I keep more of that money and the people who just want the shirt can get the shirt. Like, I sell a comically small amount of merch as it is, so the prices would need to be actually ridiculous.

ProjectGnome

Here’s a $3,000 pre-order for a spaceship in a video game. https://robertsspaceindustries.com/en/pledge/ships/aegis-javelin/Javelin Some people have bought multiple because they want to support the developers that much, eventually they’ll get a cool space ship to fly around but some people have been waiting over a decade. That doesn’t stop people from pumping thousands of dollars into virtual goods. You could always do different levels of merch where some merch you break even on and other merch you make a nice chunk of change on. It’s your business and you can run it however you want; your diehard fans will want to support you in a variety of ways and sporting your merch allows them to bring you up in conversation without being super awkward about it.