DayZ Critique - Combining parts 1-9 into a whole #3 (Patreon)
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The next two chapters are ready.
I'm afraid these two you've definitely seen before. And fairly recently at that. But I just had to make some corrections and apply some polish to get them in a presentable state.
6/10 - Zombies
7/10 - Hero Decay
The hero decay chapter has gone through quite a bit of tightening. The previous version had a really muddled structure as I'd simply done a bad job of isolating my points. Therefore I've entirely re-voiced the middle bit. Shaving off about two minutes. Hopefully it more cohesive.
Additionally I've rebalanced the audio so the music should be less overbearing in both. Let me know if you spot any whoopsies.
So for the curious the road-map now looks like this. I now stand at a crossroad and have a choice. Either go with polishing 1, 2 & 3. Or go to the end with part 10. I might alternate back and forth in order to stay focused.
The work continues :)