DRAFT - Redoing part 3 of the DayZ video-essay (Patreon)

Good morning everybody. Thank you for taking part in the poll. I'll do a follow up post in a moment about that :)

Over the last week though, I've been doing something  completely different. Attempting to fix a very problematic piece of the DayZ video-essay series.

For those not familiar, I occasionally disappear to work on a semi-private series in a completely different format from the bullshitteries - a video-essay critique on the DayZ Standalone. Partly because it helps reduce editor burnout by doing something new (just as I did with the horror thing), but mainly because I've been so dissatisfied with the dialogue on Youtube about what happened back then that I wanted to eventually fix it.

Over the last week, I've been working to fix part 3/10 - Activities of DayZ, which proved in hindsight to be woefully constructed, due to my inexperience at the time.

I've made a draft version that you're welcome to review. In which most of the audio has been complete, but the visuals are still quite bare bones. 

I've spent about 1 week on it, but it needs at least another 3. I was going to do lots of fancy animations and diagrams. Add lots of background music. That sort of thing. But it's presentable for now, though please excuse the jank.

I'd love to hear your thoughts if you have any. Particularly when it comes to the broad structure and whether or not you can follow my points. And thank you in advance, the feedback is very helpful :)

And for those curious in seeing more, some links to some other available drafts can be found below:

Part 1 - https://youtu.be/Uu9mUSTLMUY 

Part 2 - https://youtu.be/u7twpzFTPM4

Part 6 - https://youtu.be/We44N3Oubjk

Part 7 - https://youtu.be/H4JwoSQOZ0w

Part 8 - https://youtu.be/olbZbbGE4qM

Part 9 - https://youtu.be/RIYjA5nBhA0

Part 10 - https://youtu.be/a8FiLrCdGnI

Part 11 - https://youtu.be/w1Zjas1P3E0