DayZ Critique - Part 1 to 5 and update on 6 (Patreon)

So I'm afraid I'm out of time on the video essay side front. 

In the last two weeks there were 10 working days. I used 6 of them to revise parts 3 and 4. Which should be available in draft form below:

Part 1 - https://youtu.be/lByX_3dzUy4

Part 2 - https://youtu.be/u7twpzFTPM4

Part 3 - https://youtu.be/GFI9QquxUEw

Part 4 - https://youtu.be/GR83kGrcZRE

Part 5 - https://youtu.be/5Sc2qSmx-e4

But I feel like I'm going to disappoint as I was not able to get part 6 - "PvE threats in survival games" completed in the remaining 4 days. It's simply a big chapter (20 minutes long) with lots of visuals still to cut. Here's a view of the timeline 

Most of the draft sections are also plagued with quality errors or inconsistent audio. But if you have any feedback on the arguments themselves, it would be most appreciated. Not necessarily agreement with my points, just any areas where you found yourself unconvinced so I can adapt the chapter accordingly.

For now though it's back to Random Bullshittery this week. I'm not sure which game yet. I'll need to go through the footage available to see what's here.

Before all of that though, today is another training day. So I'll focus on improving my skill with Adobe After Effects and let you know how I got on.