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Hey all,

'nother Good Intentions short here. I've tried to keep these to the timespan between Good Intentions and Natural Consequences, but this may be the last of those before I start jumping around in the timeline. Hope you enjoy!

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Vairya1

Great story. Got us going with a bit of guilt over the Onyx thing, then took us in an unexpected and exciting direction. Plentiful tension, and you folded in that bit about Alex's developing past-lives condition. There's a lot here for just a few pages, but it didn't feel cluttered at all. The links to Natural Consequences were satisfyingly clear, the intro was smooth, and you stuck the ending, as usual. A great bridge to Natural Consequences. Well done!

TwoArmedBlueandRedDrapes

Hmm, makes me wonder if a vampire has ever "defected" like Lorelei did. This guy almost sounded like he was... until he wasn't.