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Hello Hero of Sly Flourish!

I prevously mentioned a new yet-unnamed lazy GM project I'm working on and sent out the first batch of chapters for your feedback a few weeks ago. It's time for batch 2!

I expect to release four or five such batches over the next couple of months and am eager to hear what you think.

Download the Lazy GM Project Batch 2 PDF

I'll post all batches on the Hero-Tier Rewards page as they come out. Please note, I don't expect to keep them on there once the actual book is published since they'll be outdated by newer edits at that point.

You don't need to send me grammar or structure edits – this hasn't been through any level of editing yet. Instead, I have particular questions for you to answer based on what you read of the scope of the project in the first chapter.

What isn't in here that really needs to be in here?

What is in here that really doesn't need to be in here?

Any other feedback you want to provide is always appreciated!

You can provide feedback to me in two ways:

You can leave comments on this Patreon post.

You can email me at mike@slyflourish.com.

Thank you so much and I hope you enjoy what you see!

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Nicholas Mayon

I may have missed it since I was skimming this while on break at work. But I also think including Campaign Themes, and Genres might help narrow your Player characters to best fit the Campaign. A Dark fantasy, vs a Pulp Fantasy, Versus the Muppets Lord of the Ring will all have different Vibes even if they follow the same story. Again might have missed you writing this in the packet but as always your books and tips look great

Michael Shea

Thanks for the feedback! I added it to my big list for the third draft.