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Hi guys!

Hope you are taking care of yourself. Self-care is very important! Nonetheless, let's start this devlog! :D

šŸ†• Episode 8 status!? What about Episode 7!?

Truth is that partially because of my eccentric workflow where I experiment a lot and end up in weird schedule situations... I currently have 6-7 new CGs and 50% of the corresponding script. In other words Episode 7 turned into 2 due to the size. It's going well but it took me double the time it usually takes.SPOILERS: Story-wise we are taking our first steps towards cuckolding... Very slowly but it's starting, so I have to make it flow natural. I also decided to include a bit more of Yuki. For people who wants some action already, be mind that this is slow-burn with focus on storytelling in order to make it more sweet when it finally happens... I plan to go ALL IN when the day comes! So for now... enjoy the teasing...

I still don't know how to release these episodes, it will depend on the final result and how it reads. Probably I'll release 7 first and 8 after short while. Or maybe 7+8 together.

Progress (Ep. 7 + 8?):

Writing: 50%

CGs: 4/6 - The last 2 are on the final coloring stage.

Sprite new outfits: 3/3

Coding: 75%

Proofreading: 0%

QA Testing: 0%

🌸 About Indecent Wife Hana

As you know, the game is 95% finished. All but 1 crucial ending (maybe 2-3). The game is still on-hold but probably not much for too long. So, please be patient and stay tuned more for info!

Making Visual Novels is fun but I miss making manga... I enjoy narrating with images more than words. Fans enjoy my writing and I'm honored and surprised, but if I'm good even in the slightest, is because I worked very hard trying to get better at something I was very bad... I love stories... Any type... I want to tell stories in some way until I die.Tell me in the comments... Which is your favorite way to immerse in NTR works... visual novel or manga? And why?

That’s it for now. See you soon...

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Newbe163

Answer to your NTR question: visual novel

thomas

I thought you had already abandoned the development of Indecent Wife Hana.

NDT 0117

Visual novel! Glad for any kind of update.

Azure

I do enjoy both forms of media but I like visual novels more for 2 reasons. 1 music can but you in the different states of mind. 2 is because of the format manga is in there is almost no slow burn ntr and when there is you will always see either both perspectives immediately or it usually will show you either only the mindset of the person being cucked or the person being ntr

Xico Aguilera

Visual novel. I would prefer to get episode 7 first, really curious on the new beach arc

Alex Francis

Visual novels because they let you do multiple branches and endings. I've never seen anyone doing multiple branches and different endings in a manga. So if you're writing mangas, you straight up lose that option. Then there are the little things like bg music, moans and animations that just enhance the overall experience. Plus small preferences like choosing which POV to watch and which to skip, and all those tiny effects that happen based on the choices you made in the game.

FallenEros

True. Its a different way with its own limitations too. The perspectives is my main issue too. And true, is very difficult to find slow burn NTR manga

Leunamus

Visual Novel, easily. Can't beat having control over the flow of dialogue, the voice acting, and plus some of them even have animated sections. The cherry on top

John Wayne

Visual Novel because it does expressions better and can have audio sound effects. It's also usually a better art style and quality.

combow test

Visual novels just gives story life, unlike a manga and it's sweeter because of the slow burn and when it's released to the public it's more thrilling

FallenEros

That's very true. It offers many advantages and more immersion

Milf Hunter

Sweet and slow, the perfect combination šŸ¤

Riidher66776

I like perspectives from all three sides, it gives you the flavor of the lust and the passion, and even the guilt (if there is any) from the woman's point of view. If we only follow the MC, we miss so much of the story that is hidden from our view. What was the deciding factor that convinced Aiko to step over the line and then to stay there? To watch his long-time friend scramble to hold the lie together, while keeping Aiko happy and satisfying his lust for this incredible woman who is married to his long-time friend. I firmly believe this is the difference between a good story and a great story.

Ky Tsu

In before we get hit with a choose your own adventure book. Be talking about turn to page 85 for this route or 120 for the alt route XD

Senpainium

Can't wait to see the NTR finally start!

Damaged Codex

VN. Most manga feels rushed if it doesn't have multiple installments. Short and sweet can be nice, but then the feeling of the build up in a VN is just incomparable and seems unfair to put manga against it. Plus people that get heart aches because of the cheating can get more into it since it allows us to get more invested. (Watch more Netori if your still hurting for MC cause its hilarious once you learn how to)

hugsfordrugs

Is there going to be branching paths, like some for ntr and some for just the storytelling? I'm asking because I play these types of games for the drama and slice of life aspect not the fetish. I understand you got to implement the ntr though its what the game is about. but giving the MC different responses would make the game playable for players like myself, like the MC catches them early in the act or he finds out later and either reconciles with her or divorces her, stuff like that. Will that be in the game?

hugsfordrugs

I agree with the whole all three sides approach, however. If the husband is a good husband and aiko does cheat on him behind his back with his best friend, without his knowledge and both of them try to hide it from him. Then there really is no excuse for that, whatever her reason is going be it will never justify her actions or excuse her of committing such a horrible act. Her doing this kind of stuff does not make her a "incredible women" as you say in the story. There for this should give the MC different options to choose from, this is vital because ultimately he is the victim in this situation and he has the final say on what happens. I'm not saying don't add ntr I'm just saying to balance it out so everyone can enjoy the game not just a select few. But to say it's lust and passion and not mentioning it as being betrayal as well is making your comment sound like this is supposed to be a joyful moment for the MC which really soly depends on what the player chooses not what your opinion is. So making several different routes from all three perspectives is what truly makes a game like this shine and turns it into something more than just a ntr game.

Ravenhill

Seconding that. I like the slowburn, the ambiguity, maybe NTS. But to me personally hardcore NTR with the usual corruption routes and willing betrayal is not healthy for my mindset, and I should start avoiding them. Some of Hana's storyline was already pushing my limits. But the story and the subversion of the tropes are keeping me here for now.

hugsfordrugs

It really should be you the players decision though but at the same time keeping the mystery while doing that as the game dev. If you want to avoid the willing betrayal route or courption route you should be able to do that. like having selections and wondering if you made the right call or not good routes bad routes that kind of stuff is what makes these types of games something more than just ntr.

Dyffryn

I prefer the IWH story, it would be good if you finished this story before starting another one.

M-port Papua

That thumbnail just makes me think one thing: Damn, Aiko's head looks like a balloon compared to Ryou's. Take care!. Aim for the Moon!!

Mentarium

visual novel for sure. more freedom as a player to control what the story looks like for you (when given the option of course). when I'm reading manga it's a guaranteed linear path that you either like or don't like. I really enjoy the choose your own adventure type setting most VNs tend to have. especially with genres that are as volatile as NTS and NTR where a story will start with everything i want then suddenly veer off into everything i don't

Chumare-_-

Fallen the update is closer? Or when can you give information for the update??

Andy Chao

Bro podremos ver esnus nus (referencia futurama) en la siguiente actualización? Osea los escenarios desde la perspectiva de la eroinia con el mejor amigo ?

jay

Any news?

Vin

I do enjoy both format, visual novel allows more dialogs and thus more immersive while manga gives more visual normally

wtmhsy

I completely agree with you, and we even share the same opinion about Hana, I prefer pure netorase rather than true hard NTR. I like the feeling of a couple's relationship being unshakable and trusting each other, with everything being a kind of marital fun. Corruption and betrayal make me feel very upset T T.

hugsfordrugs

I agree with you, I like the whole martial fun ones too but I do like the cheating behind the MC back ones as well if they are done right. They have to have a sort of surrealness and heartwreching moments added to them. And they can't like restrict what the player wants to do, so having several choices is vital. This helps add diversity to the story telling, doing this while also keeping the mystery is hard but it's rewarding and really makes a game like this shine.

Anzyz

You’re doing a great job. I’m really glad to hear that this story is heading in the Netorare/Cuckolding direction; you’re handling all the mystery really well, keeping it interesting. It makes it hard not to want to see more—even though we haven’t seen any NTR yet, the tension is still there. Here are a few scenes that stood out to me and that I thought were really good: 1. The train scene. Seeing the MC so helpless while Ryou was so close to Aiko—to the point where he asked Ryou to check if Aiko’s skirt had ridden up, which obviously meant Ryou would have to look at her ass. Very good. And throughout the entire scene, the tension and awkwardness between the two of them, leaving the MC out of the loop, kept it very exciting. 2.- Aiko’s masturbation scene. This was very new to me but at the same time really good. Seeing her frustrated, masturbating, and wishing that SOMEONE would penetrate her—I emphasize that ā€œsomeoneā€ because she never mentions the MC, and that makes it twice as good—it leaves open the possibility that it might be another man who gives her pleasure, not her husband. It also describes rough sex as something that really turns her on—she wants to be dominated—and we haven’t seen the MC in that role so far. I would have liked it if, at that moment, Ryou had knocked on the door and she’d gotten scared, mixing that momentary excitement with Ryou. But that’s okay; things are moving at their own pace, and I really liked how you wrote that scene. 3.- The group photo. It was a simple but good scene; I especially liked Mr. Yamashita and Ryou’s smug smiles, but I want to focus more on Ryou because everything revolves around him. It would be interesting to see some scenes of him and Mrs. Yamashita. It feels great to see that he’s so successful with women, unlike the MC, who has a sweet and adorable wife who loves him :) I wonder what the NTS will be like; I'm so eager to see it. I hope it's something spontaneous and unexpected for Aiko, but at the same time exciting for her. It would also be great if the MC played a part, and I'd really like it if there were some humiliating moments for him, too. Once again, congratulations on your great work, and I look forward to future updates. Good luck.

Xico Aguilera

Any update? It has been a while since the last post