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Smoke curled out of the shattered carcass of the Pegleg, lit up by the golden glow of Ianmus’s spell. four of its eight legs were ripped from its body, and a jagged line had been carved right through its mid section. The landyacht had been cut open level with the internal hold, right around knee level. Unless Kanmost had somehow jumped, or been laying flat on the floor, he must have been hit.

Gods, Kaius hoped the man was still alive. Kaius eyed Ianmus’s burning spell, Dolmor’s Triage. It was the Archivist’s only chance. He’d felt its power for himself. If the man had survived, it would patch him up.

Rotten roots, it better have — the cost had to be worth it. Ianmus’s keyseals took time to build up the mana required for a second tier spell. Triage was life-saving magic — and now they would need to fight a bloody wyrm without it.

Kaius tore himself away from the sight of the ruined landyacht. As much as it burned, he could do nothing for the man trapped within. If he even lived.

Sprinting back towards the wyrm, Kaius brandished his sword as his blood roared with savage determination. Never had his heart sung so loud in battle, his very Aspects spurred to heights by the Fear that yet lingered in the air.

Blood poured from the maw of Katarex, a shattered ruin more dire than any wound they had left on the beast. How the fates must have laughed, that the dragon’s worst wound was at the hands of their own Breath. 

Nails punched from his hand, sinking deep into the wound he had opened earlier on the creature's flank. He wasn’t the only one who had taken advantage of the gap in the dragon’s armour. Arrow after arrow slammed into the gap. Kaius had no idea if they were wounding anything vital, but with each blow they wormed deeper into the dragon's body. He hoped beyond hopes that they were — they wouldn’t win this fight by simply trying to bleed Katarex of health.

His brother hammered the dragon's front. With their maw ruined, Katarex could no longer crack his brother’s armour so easily. Rising high, the dragon whipped towards Porkchop with repeated fury, driving their horns deep. Every gushing hole tore at Kaius’s heart, but he had to trust his brother would hold.

Kaius drew deep on his slim reserve of free mana, laying into the dragon with Dissolution Edge. He had to crack open another wound. Every hole they could keep open and bleeding would weaken the creature further — even if just by physically cutting through its muscles. 

Iron scales rebuffed his strike, his roaring Skill only scouring the wyrm’s hide. Undeterred, Kaius slashed again and again, switching to Hellblade Investiture when his mana grew low. Fury bellowed from Katarex, mana joining it in equal measure. Katarex spoke no taunt, nor grandiose boast, focused as they were in their anger. 

Turning the wyrm's own Breath against them must have been as much of a wound to the arrogant creature’s pride as anything else. 

Yet that was no balm to Kaius, for it only meant it was treating them seriously.

Katarex writhed in a constant storm, driving Kaius back with a snapping crack of their oar-like tail. The flattened appendage scooped the water, hurling a magic-empowered deluge towards him. He noticed the skill a moment too slow. 

Bones crunched in his chest as the wave hit him with the power of a siege engine. Kaius roared in pain. A Shunt interrupted his tumble, hurtling him towards the creature's rear. They had to split the wyrm’s focus! 

From above, he saw the nobles keeping up their assault. Blood painted the creature scales red on its opposite flank, blackened ribs visible within the gaping crater in its flesh. Another bolt slammed home, erupting into a spray of noxious green fluid. Flesh bubbled, sloughing free. 

Kaius had to give Julian credit — he was more than happy to spend his money like water when it counted.

Touching down as his final rib snapped into place, Kaius cleaved into Katarex — desperate to rip open their  hide. 

“Kaius! They’re casting!” Porkchop roared.

Kaius whipped towards his brother’s battle. Porkchop was a wreck. Cracks stretched through his heavy plate, and one massive pauldron had been torn free entirely. Kaius knew he could refresh the armour with a bare few seconds, but he’d never had the chance. Blood soaked Porkchop utterly. It dripped into the water, wafting like smoke through the gleaming liquid.

What he saw of the wyrm was far more concerning. Their ruby eyes were focused, and their crown of horns shone with aquamarine intensity. A deluge of mana, kept chained within the curled spikes. Four dozen streamers rose from their tips, weaving into a construct of staggering complexity. The speed with which they worked was terrifying, beyond what even Ianmus would be able to manage with all of his advantages. 

The wyrm was casting. His blade hacked at its flesh; Porkchop snarled and clawed at Katarex’s belly; shining solar magic fury burned through fat and muscle, and projectile after projectile ripped into their side — and they were casting.

He broke through their hide. The wyrm snarled, whipping their tail with a great heaving crack, the spell forged above their head not wavering for a moment. As the blow shattered his arm, Kaius was filled with grim realisation. He was not unique in this world. Others revelled in their equal love of might and magic. 

What terrible fate that his reflection had to be a fucking dragon.

Kaius called on his own command of the arcane. The shifting miasma of a Zone of Discombobulation snapped around the wyrm. They stilled, shaking their head slightly. Kaius redoubled his assault. He had saved himself for this moment, and he refused to be a miser any longer. 

Crackling arcs erupted from his hand as Drakthar burned with violent light. Kaius roared, hurling his whip of chained lightning towards the wyrm’s head. Scales blackened; Katarex screamed. Eirnith shone on Kaius’s temples as he reached for the wyrm’s mind, Compelling them to focus on the spasms and pain that wracked them. 

The mana construct wavered.

Kaius roared, striking them with a second Stormlash, then a third, and a fourth! His allies pressed just as hard. A shining arrow ripped across the cavern, shuddering with explosive energy. Sinking deep into the ruined mess of the wyrm’s muzzle, the arrow exploded, showering the ground with bloodied teeth. Katarex screamed, writhing into a frenzy that sent Skill-empowered waves ripping across the cavern. The wyrm’s spell shuddered. Bolts slammed into the open wound in their side. The sun was born again, shining brighter than the wellspring itself. It hit Katarex in the side, swallowing the creature in cleansing fire.

The spell collapsed.

There was no moment of relief. Power surged high through the monstrosity — another welling of violence gathering in their throat.

“Dragon’s Breath!” Kaius roared a warning, unsure of who the creature might target.

Maddened in their fury, Katarex chose them all. 

Thick as his arm, a jet of water sharper than any blade shot from the wyrm’s maw. Porkchop lurched, roaring in pain as the pressurised beam kissed his side and tore through his armour like it was made of paper. Katarex snapped their head around, raking the chamber. Kaius’s heart pounded in his chest. Heeding the screams of Moment of Flow and Sergeant’s Insight he launched upwards with a Shunt, the beam ripping a bare handspan beneath his feet. 

The assault continued on, tearing into the stone wall of the cavern. Massive boulders fell, crashing to the ground below. The nobles were next. Their chargers burst upwards, buoyed by the winds. Yet the Wyrm halted and ripped back towards them. A retainer exploded into a burst of gore, mount and all. Julian’s mount screamed, one of its back legs vanishing. The man threw himself free — just barely saving his own leg. Ianmus, at least, was okay — his mount had sailed high over the beam.

The Breath died. 

“Kenva?!” he roared a desperate question. He didn’t dare to take his eyes off their enemy, not even for a moment.

“I’m okay!”

Relief surged within him. Kaius raced back in, they couldn’t give the wyrm a bare moment to recover. 

The Fear had lessened. Its remnants were still enough to spur his Aspects to cycle at a furious pace, but it was not enough to weigh on him like it had been. Was it the psuedo-Authority? Their Breath had been bursting with the stuff — perhaps they could only draw on the resource so much. 

They had to capitalise on the opportunity. Already mana rose from the wyrm’s horns, weaving a second spell with supernatural speed. Yet for all of their lethality, they had wounded the beast. Katarex’s jaw was a bloody ruin, and they had gouged out great divots from the wyrm’s sides. Even Porkchop had torn through the thinner scales on their belly, ripping chunks free with his massive claws.

Yet not once did he think the battle had turned in their favour.  

Grievous wounds or no, the Drake was utterly unphased. Kaius remembered their battle with the drake. That creature had been monstrous — it had survived it’s brain being scrambled. That was a mere pale reflection of the creature in front of him, and half Katarex’s level besides. How much punishment would Katarex be able to take before they could put the wyrm down?

Kaius hurled another volley of Stormlash and Compel Obsession, desperate to break Katarex’s focus. They couldn’t let them cast — the bastard was trouble enough without their strongest weapon. 

Burning through his spells with furious abandon, weighty dread hung heavy in Kaius’s belly. For all they hammered the creature, the dense weaves only continued. Bit by bit, they formed a dense knot of radiating geometry.

They couldn’t stop the wyrm, no matter how much he smote the wyrm, or how deep Porkchop tore into the blackened wound left by Ianmus’s Halo.

Inevitably, they cast.

“Now you die!” Katarax raged as mana erupted from their  crown.

The energy sank deep into the waters that surrounded the cave. In an instant the thin puddle vanished, all water drawn towards nine towering tendrils that sprouted from the creatures back. They writhed like living whips, drowning the cavern in a basso roar as a constant current surged through their lengths.

Kaius grit his teeth and raced in despite the danger, Bound Maelstrom howling around him. The spell would shield him. They had to push.

Two tendrils punched towards them. Slipstep blurred around him, narrowly saving his advance as a tendril phased through his hip. They raced back. Kaius went high with a Shunt, hurling a salvo of Nails at the ruined wreck of the wyrm’s maw. If he was lucky, the bastard might choke. 

Touching down, he caught sight of Porkchop roaring as another four tendrils lanced him again and again, each one ripping deep into his brother’s back. Porkchop pushed through the wounds, driving an Ethereal Phalanx to charge at the dragon. Yet Kaius knew each one drew deeply from his brother’s reserves. Even the shining drops of gold that washed over his back, courtesy of Ianmus’s continuous use of Revitalising Droplet, would not be enough to fully stem the tide.

Danger screamed to Kaius’s left. He shot down, a tendril curving over his head.

It whipped back — and punched through his chest. 

Kaius gasped, choking as his lungs filled with blood. Shards of bone ripped through his flesh as the tentacle hurled him aside. More broke as he hit the ground. Yet there was no time for his agony. Another lanced down towards him, two more close on its tail. Kaius’s eyes widened, hurling himself away with a Shunt. 

He skipped along the ground, trailing a bloody smear. Too slow. A tendril slapped his leg, snapping it in half. Kaius roared, creating more distance. He just needed a little time!

Flying out of range, he tumbled through the air, the entire cavern whirling before his eyes. He saw the Wellspring, in all its glowing glory. The wyrm raged at its banks, bloodied and triumphant as Porkchop desperately held the line. He saw Julian's crippled mount, screaming on the ground, abandoned where it had fallen. The nobles themselves were half way around the cavern, Ianmus still riding strong at the rear of their formation. He saw Kenva, her face white and worried as she channeled her all into yet another Howl of the North Wind.

He saw Kanmost, dragging himself out of the ruins of the Pegleg, his legs little more than freshly healed nubs.

Kaius landed with a stagger, his wounds burning as blood pooled around his feet. They couldn’t go on like this.A/N: things are heating up!

Expect a few retcon updates at the start of the next chapter, based on some changes I made in b2 and b3 edits that will be relevant for that chapter.Also, on the few who have been struggling with the use of singular they/them for Katarex--it is the grammatically correct pronoun to use in this instance. The singular they has been in use since the 1500s to refer to individuals of an indeterminate gender. As I write in close third, and the wyrm has the voice of a giant death lizard, the cast don't know what gender the wyrm is. They also don't care, as the pertinent information is the fact it is a giant dragon and trying to eat them. I also intentionally try to reserve it/its pronouns for creatures that the given pov does not really see as 'people'. That includes boggarts and goblins because Kaius is kinda racist like that. I also intend to use it/its for any depthsborn simulacra of sapient races that may or may not appear in the future of the series. I will likely mess that up by simple force of habit, so feel free to point it out lol.That being said, individual uses of singular they can cause pronoun confusion in a given sentence, so lemme know if there are specific examples where you think 'Katarex' or 'the wyrm' would bring more clarity. I've tried to use those pronouns when the same sentence, or close ones, also uses plural they to refer to the main team.

Comments

AB

Tftc! Feels super tense. Great fight scenes!

Books And guns

I think this is the best fight you’ve written so far! I am loving it! As for how you are referring to the dragon. I think that even though it is the grammatically correct way to do so. It is still a but jarring. Sometimes grammatical correctness has to give way to ease of use. With that said, I understand your reasoning, and it is getting less jarring as I read it more. It just still kinda takes me out of it. I think Kaius is about to jump in the font. Power up time! Thank you for the chapter!

Bacon Macleod

Yeah, it's one of those things that just requires enough exposure for your brain to treat it as proppah english and then it becomes invisible. My betas and editor catch me using it for kaius et al all the time lol

Books And guns

Absolutely, I can feel that in adapting to it. Did you use it this much in any previous engagements? I don’t recall noticing it. If not, it may be worth going back and making it a bit more prevalent in earlier fights, so people’s brains have adapted by the time they get to this one.

Kevin Warne

Tftc. I’ve come around to Bacon’s use of singular they for the enemy and this chapter read fine to me. Agree that switching singular and plural they is not always clear. Maybe use ‘the wyrm’ at least once after any use of plural they to create better separation.

Kevin Warne

Also, good job on book 1 audio book on audible. Narration was great overall. Maybe 5% faster in last quarter of the book relative to first three quarters, but easy enough to fix w playback controls and perhaps the narrator was staring down 30+ hours and just wanted to finish and go home.

Salientmind

Goddamn man. I don't know how they win unless one of the four pulls out some bullshit.

Ashen-Shugar

Yes yes, your writings fine, the intensity and flows more important than mere grammar mistakes, I don't even see them, only complaint I have is, well Not Enough, If that's even a complaint.. 👍👍

Ashen-Shugar

Right, my mind glides past it, try working in other cities n areas people talk different enough to threw you for a loop..

book__wyrm

"Grievous wounds or no, the Drake was utterly unphased. Kaius remembered their battle with the drake." First one should be Wyrm, no? Unrelated, I am so often surrounded online by nonbinary people like myself who use they/them pronouns that it genuinely startled me to see so many people confused about them lmao. Funny how segmented the internet can be.

Talmor

TFTC

Bacon Macleod

yeah lol, I listen to it on 0.95 speed. I'm super stoked with it though, and I love the little bell. Very keen to hear the wider cast in book 2

Tom Pulk

Nice. I was thinking that we haven't seen a Ekum short in a while, I think after battling a wyrm and getting the benefits of a wellspring the observer might just get a notification about his chosen steed.

Bacon Macleod

Yeah, i've been thoroughly infected by the agenda, so I throw they/them around pretty interchangeably with other pronouns, but when writing its best to be specific as possible to ensure clarity. That generally means gendered pronouns when applicable, or peppering in names and other descriptors for unspecified or nonbinary characters when 'they' might cause some confusion about who is being referenced.

DeadicatedReader

Tftc! Great stuff. spell. four of its eight legs -> Four

Lillian Gwendolyn

thank u woke author, singular they is chill, i dont get why people get wierd about reading it

Robert Gardner

TFTC. Good fight and this is what they need to grow and see both honours and refinement coming from this. Edits: Grievous wounds or no, the Drake was utterly unphased -> Grievous wounds or no, the Wyrm was utterly unphased

Ashen-Shugar

The observer dude, almost forgot about them once we got above ground!

JBloodthorn

Singular they caused no issue in the 80's and 90's when I was growing up. It being a problem is entirely modern. If someone has a problem with it, they should re-examine why. Also, nya-nya I used "they" for them.

Drethlos

Thanks for the chapter, a quick question. What is the current upload schedule? Can’t wait to find out how this fight ends, and how it will impact things going forward.

Crazyone47

Hey is there any reason why Spear of Nectus or Starfall or any other glyph couldn't be used with Father's Gift via Runeblade Hymnfocus while inserted inside the Wyrm's (I'm not gonna call him a dragon) Flesh? Seems like a prime opportunity to burn or blast off some flesh so as to drain Health. Why not use use Starfall to cause a lot of damage or Nectus to cause frost bite that could literally reach the bone? Or just Nail to rip flesh. Actually could you exploit Health Regenration to drain it by inflicting hard to heal or massive wounds? Like say if the spinal column was damaged would health then be drained to heal that? Say did he test out dissonant or harmonious resonance resonance of Spellblade's Harmonic Control on Dissolution Edge? For that matter can Glyphs other than Drakthar's be used with Runeblade? For example War Haven for a Block or Shunt for a thrust? Just feels like for all of Kaius's arsenal we haven't seen it have that much of an effect taking advantage of the Glyph Affinities. Seems like he uses it in different ways to attack rather than using it to counter or devastate it with the unique properties. Can Dissolution Edge be used with Runeblade Hymnfocus?

HJ

next chappie wen?

KluE

"Kaius grit his teeth and raced in despite the danger, Bound Maelstrom howling around him. The spell would shield him. They had to push." i don't mind using they for the dragon- but it does get confusing when it's used as both a singular for one thing and a plural for another thing so close together. Im not sure if there's a good substitute without restructuring the paragraph for this example, but maybe only using strictly plural terms (everyone, the team, etc) when referring to Kaius' group?

Nick

You said the “Drake” instead of the Wyrm.”

MJ

The singular they isn't an issue as much as the separation between that and the plural + gendered pronouns. The bigger issue is that beasts were its and suddenly became they/them. Perhaps it won't be an issue for others but for me, I've been ripping through the book and chapters non stop and the change to pronouns vs it was jarring. Obviously, love the story. Won't be here otherwise

sigma

> Kaius! They’re casting! would read a lot better as "Kaius! It's casting" It took me a second to realise it was referring to the dragon and not the knights