Beta Feedback - Reborn as a Dragon Mage (Patreon)

This is from an author friend looking for feedback/thoughts as they write this series. I appreciate the time/help if you're willing to give it.

It's a google doc with permission to leave comments.

A bit weird I'm sure for some of you, but it is what it is.

Enjoy if you want :)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18Kusvfp-Im1_ePOU9a7NXF0Ox1-vfpN7tpvvDaelILE/edit?usp=sharing