Progress: Having some problems (Patreon)

Lately my progress was interrupted by a problem I had with Honey Select... It wouldn't let me save. I spent many days trying to fix it with the help of Illusion Soft discord members and recently I was able to do it and continue with the game. I am going through a process that is a bit slow but very sure, I already have in mind what I want to do and how I want to do it, I leave you here a small preview

I think there are little details that I need to adjust a bit, but I feel like I'm on the right track, what do you think?