August Update - Pages 40-49 Roughs (Patreon)

Chapter 1 is now entirely sketched out. These are the roughs for the final pages! All that remains is going in and refining, shading, etc, which is actually a lot faster than it sounds. Composing the page layouts, writing the dialogue, and getting the pacing right are what takes me the longest. This is really the toughest part. So for anyone who's wondering what I've been doing throughout most of July... it was this. :v

These are subject to change as I go through and refine them. In particular there are a few lines of dialogue that I'm still iffy about, and some slight pacing issues. I also will be adding a final page, to close the chapter and bring the page count to a nice even 50. It will be probably a single image but I haven't decided on what it should be yet.

I'm still unemployed, so this is still my main focus. I'm aiming to have the chapter complete by September, but I'm not sure I can work that fast, and I won't rush this.

As always, sorry for being so slow. I got really hung up with some of the dialogue in these scenes and it brought my work speed to a crawl.

$30 Tier Patrons: I'll be doing your July requests this week! Feel free to send me your August requests as well.